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Ermine9 [2014-10-02 01:03:12 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


I love the composition and I feel that this crop is much better than the first version of this picture. I think the first version of this picture should have been in black and white and this version should have been in color. That might just be because I have already seen what the color since post look like and I really like the combinations of blues.

Despite my love of the colors, I feel that in this black-and-white second version of this picture makes it easier to read the woman’s emotion from her facial expression.

The lighting in this picture is really great, the picture is perfectly balanced and I’m captivated by all the texture detail that I can see in the picture. Great job!

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peterpateman In reply to Ermine9 [2014-10-02 03:26:12 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for taking the time to critique my work, it is much appreciated.

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wiwionart [2015-01-21 10:28:06 +0000 UTC]

wonderful portrait! Β  Β  Β 

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peterpateman In reply to wiwionart [2015-01-22 17:01:49 +0000 UTC]

Thank you Wiwi!

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wiwionart In reply to peterpateman [2015-01-22 17:27:31 +0000 UTC]

you`re so very welcome, Peter! Β 

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Corvidae65 [2014-09-21 22:26:51 +0000 UTC]

I like the classic tones of this black and white version but I think I prefer the color version a teeny bit more Β 

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peterpateman In reply to Corvidae65 [2014-09-22 20:03:52 +0000 UTC]

I always appreciate any feedback, thanks John!

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LawrenceCornellPhoto [2014-06-23 16:47:40 +0000 UTC]

Well I wouldn't take her on Another fantastic character

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peterpateman In reply to LawrenceCornellPhoto [2014-06-23 22:56:37 +0000 UTC]

I'm with you there, thanks Lawrence.

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x-bossie-boots-x [2014-06-20 16:40:50 +0000 UTC]

Amazing capture

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peterpateman In reply to x-bossie-boots-x [2014-06-21 01:16:04 +0000 UTC]

Glad you like it dear!

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x-bossie-boots-x In reply to peterpateman [2014-06-21 06:56:27 +0000 UTC]

I sure do my friend

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mecengineer [2014-06-19 18:21:22 +0000 UTC]

perfect

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peterpateman In reply to mecengineer [2014-06-21 01:15:31 +0000 UTC]

Thank you Talat!

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jennystokes [2014-06-12 14:21:03 +0000 UTC]

Superb portrait Peter.
She looks naughty!

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peterpateman In reply to jennystokes [2014-06-14 21:49:43 +0000 UTC]

Thank you Jenny, she does look mischievious!

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jennystokes In reply to peterpateman [2014-06-15 08:35:31 +0000 UTC]

That's the word I was looking for.

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peterpateman In reply to jennystokes [2014-06-15 21:53:42 +0000 UTC]

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MARX77 [2014-06-11 18:55:29 +0000 UTC]

Cool portrait, Peter.

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peterpateman In reply to MARX77 [2014-06-12 02:10:58 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Khuram!

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vw1956 [2014-06-11 10:34:34 +0000 UTC]

Great portrait!!!

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peterpateman In reply to vw1956 [2014-06-11 14:47:30 +0000 UTC]

Thank you Volker!

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vw1956 In reply to peterpateman [2014-06-12 11:35:13 +0000 UTC]

My pleasure, Peter

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Trippy4U [2014-06-11 05:28:02 +0000 UTC]

She works quite well in B&W too

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peterpateman In reply to Trippy4U [2014-06-11 14:31:08 +0000 UTC]

Thanks buddy!

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glunac [2014-06-10 20:48:20 +0000 UTC]

She has a gorgeous faceΒ 

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peterpateman In reply to glunac [2014-06-11 00:39:30 +0000 UTC]

I think so Gloria, thank you!

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k-i-mm-i-e [2014-06-10 20:34:36 +0000 UTC]

Nice capture, Peterlicious. <3

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peterpateman In reply to k-i-mm-i-e [2014-06-11 00:41:47 +0000 UTC]

Thank you Ellie!

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k-i-mm-i-e In reply to peterpateman [2014-06-11 10:56:22 +0000 UTC]

My pleasure dearlicious. Β 

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MARX77 In reply to k-i-mm-i-e [2014-06-11 18:52:07 +0000 UTC]

What's with the 'licious?

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k-i-mm-i-e In reply to MARX77 [2014-06-11 20:01:02 +0000 UTC]

licious is something cute my big verybad brotherlicious.

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MARX77 In reply to k-i-mm-i-e [2014-06-11 20:25:59 +0000 UTC]

Alrite my little troublemaker sisterlicious, if you say so.Β  Β 

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k-i-mm-i-e In reply to MARX77 [2014-06-11 20:31:21 +0000 UTC]

You should try it sometime. CallΒ  Richardlicious. He'll luv you Long time.

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Trippy4U In reply to k-i-mm-i-e [2014-06-11 23:26:39 +0000 UTC]

Dam woman...she's Jamaican not Asian. Get the accent right

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k-i-mm-i-e In reply to Trippy4U [2014-06-11 23:36:49 +0000 UTC]

Oops, sorry.

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MARX77 In reply to k-i-mm-i-e [2014-06-11 20:40:12 +0000 UTC]


What?? Hell no! The guy will disown me!Β 
It's not like he owns me or anything.
But it won't matter to him, cause he'll disown me anyway!

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Trippy4U In reply to MARX77 [2014-06-11 23:27:18 +0000 UTC]

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k-i-mm-i-e In reply to Trippy4U [2014-06-11 23:36:24 +0000 UTC]

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k-i-mm-i-e In reply to MARX77 [2014-06-11 20:48:35 +0000 UTC]

Aww, it is OK. He disowned me many times cause of my Pictures. Call him asslicious. I'm so mad now. haha

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