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Published: 2020-03-14 07:13:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 174; Favourites: 14; Downloads: 0
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Harmonic clockworkIn perfect congruency
Noisily ticking
Countdown to their own demise
As brass gears slowly corrode
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Oooh, I love the storyline of these gears corroding and slowing down. It makes me wonder what will happen as a result of it. ^_^
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Thank you! ^_^ I guess only time will unveil the answer to this mystery...
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Oooh, all of your words and imagery fit the theme so well. Also, I stand with you, battle-brother! For whosoever has a problem with you will feel the sting of my hammerΒ Β
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Hehe, thanks. It was really fun to try something new. And yes! My gratitude extends out to you battle-sister, for so long as we stand together only the foolhardy would conceive of contending with us!Β Β Β
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Exactly! Well-said, as always, dear battle-brotherΒ Β Β
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Thank you! It was fun to try blending symbology and... Concreteness? IDK if I'm explaining it very well.
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Thanks! I'm glad to hear it came out well ^_^
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I like it! Also, funny enough I've seen the word "incongruent" before, but this is the first time for the base word. 
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Sorry for the slow reply, but thanks! Haha I think "incongruent"'s actually the real word, whereas the one I used is... Debatable
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