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pete1672 — Story 'The Butterfly Hunter' pg17 0f 20(R) [NSFW]

Published: 2012-06-20 03:21:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 5410; Favourites: 38; Downloads: 81
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Description (f, nudity, sexually suggestive, language)pg17
The young lady riding the bus down was a private joke between my agent & myself, and is based on Buster Keaton (see pete1672's ID pic); actually, the gag idea was his I modeled her appearance b/o a real person, too, which was a private joke as well
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RD-DD1843 [2013-05-13 19:31:32 +0000 UTC]

Obviously this last cheerleader was always the grouchy one who was out of step and order with the perky idiotic ones.

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pete1672 In reply to RD-DD1843 [2013-05-14 06:18:13 +0000 UTC]

She actually retired from comics after this. Got married, and had a daughter, who followed in mom's footsteps and became the star of the animated series "Daria"

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RD-DD1843 In reply to pete1672 [2013-05-14 06:37:42 +0000 UTC]

Perfect. And one of her co-stars played the idiot cheerleader girlfriend of the sports jock in the series.

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KritterDefier [2012-06-20 17:57:44 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha gotta love how she totally coulda gotten a leap off the bus towards solid ground but no her agent was a douche instead

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pete1672 In reply to KritterDefier [2012-06-21 03:23:28 +0000 UTC]

Oh, man...don't get me started on this girl. It was a nightmare. Her 'funny little dialogue' was her idea, and she caused a lot of rewriting, editing, and headaches(she KNEW it was a one-shot deal, the bus was only going to sink once) All the other girls were 100% troopers all the way. But, this one? Well...all I can tell you is, the old saying is true-never hire relatives.

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VanderCat [2012-06-20 04:09:10 +0000 UTC]

...and it ends with a busload of blub glubing!

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pete1672 In reply to VanderCat [2012-06-20 05:35:07 +0000 UTC]

I really did try to make them irritating enough to temper the cold-bloodedness a bit

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