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PerseBalthasaar ā Conviction Rebirth
Published: 2009-08-02 11:06:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 9540; Favourites: 157; Downloads: 188
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2010 Edit: Reduced size to a profile card; color edited and intensified.Spica's Profile
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Out with the old: [link]
Looking back to it, I say it's a really good-bye art to my auto shading method. I really regret using the auto shader on it, so i remade it this way. Behold the Conviction Rebirth!
Spica got a new haircut, so I can emphasize the Vate rune on her forehead. Her clothes also tweaked a bit so she would appear to have MOAR bewbs. All changes are done in vector-only. Yes, no hand drawing is involved :3
Enjoy the remake artwork!
Spica Elnath Andromeda Ā© *PerseBalthasaar
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Princess OMG D: a thing I try to avoid. I plan to tweak this outfit by adding moar Celtic look and reducing the amount of clothing obscuring her
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To start out with, wow. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/sā¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="
Just look at this. I looked at your first piece and there is so much improvement. Your shading has become spot on, and the hair and clothes look simply gorgeous.
Your design is really well done, very unique. Again with the clothes, the outfit is really great.
The lines are smooth and clean and the facial expression as well as her eyes fit this piece perfectly.
The small changes you made to the background really helped this piece come together. The adding and then overlaying of the character again looks very alright, although in my opinion it may have been left out or maybe moved up to her level more or to the side, enlarged.
Again, the improvement is great. The lines definitely needed to stay. The shading, once again, has improved vastly. You developed the parts that needed to be dark and it really helped!
Fantastic job here, can't wait to see more!
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Thanks!
The overlaying character is just for subtle shadow effect. On a wallpaper edition, I use an enlarged one on left side and regular on right side. I don't feel like cogging the BG XD
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As you probably know already, this is *glarionac , one of the critic crew of #the-OC-maniac . Here comes the critic.
Aw...the girl looks so cute. She looks like a nice, gentle girl who's ready to help anyone in need without the feeling that she's forced to. I like her pose, her eyes, and her outfit. It fits her well. Your coloring and shading is also very good, it shows that you're not new in the field of digital drawing and coloring. The symbol on her forehead also adds the nice effect. Very good.
If there's anything I can critique, it'd look better if you can make her hands and torso longer. Or alternatively you can make the legs shorter. The point is to make the anatomy more balanced. And, please make her bangs and side [link] a bit flowy to match the rest of the hair. I think it's just natural that if the hair flows a bit, the bangs and side hair also have to flow...maybe a bit more than the hair (since they're smaller and takes less effort from the wind to make them flow). And oh, your dark shading is pretty, but it's a bit too smooth to go with your drawing. Especially in the pink-colored areas. I'm sorry if this sounds harsh...I didn't meant to say anything in bad way. Besides, other than that your picture is very pretty.
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I think I overburn the shades and it looks too dark D: And on the contrary, I'm very new at manual digital drawing XD My first manual shading attempt was June 2009 8D
The anatomy really bugs me since i can't seem pull the perfect proportion body due to her clothing make her look "fat" but I'll try to trim down on future works
I'm still learning on making hairflow ATM. It's not really my forte :<
Thanks for the critique!
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Interesting costume design there, not to mention the different-coloured eyes and the mark on her forehead.
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Yay, you got the main points of her 
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Ah yeah, to what I wonder...
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Basically to increase skin exposed, her skirt gonna be shortened, and her top will have lower neckline.
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Heh, all for the fanservice eh...
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Unintended, but more so 
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Sounds like fanservice to me...
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Yer welcome.
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I like the hair. xD
That's some nice digital work there.
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Thanks!
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You're welcome! ^_^ Yeah hair is kinda hard sometimes but it's fun to mess around with. xD
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Thank you!!
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I like this a lot. What size did you do the original in? My brother is designing a board game and wants me to do the cards for it, not sure how big to go to have them reduced properly. Any tips would be appreciated. Thanks.
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Not my type of art but great work & details !
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Thanks!
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Love the gold and pink look. Really makes her look prettier and sexy.
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Ohoho, I intend to make moar smexy by reducing covered skin >:3
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oh wow, can't wait to see that.
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You're welcome~! ^ ^
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Gyaa~ thanks! took me a long time to decide the color palette o.o
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Awesome deviation, it's really good!! Great job!
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