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Published: 2008-04-25 04:52:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 1766; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 0
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GODDAM these pages are bugging me. she better hurry up if she doesn't wanna get eaten.once again, i'm open to changes that could make it better.
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...dude... why did you get lazy inking the toes on the close up?!... not cool... and i hate those legs... but you already know that... i do like the second panel though...
...as far as solutions... for the giant leg... dont have it cutting into the top panel... i think it would be better if it went under it...
...for the "brother" panel... try adding grey blur around all the lines to show its an emotional moment...
...hope that helps...
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i'll fix it in the morning, i swear. and you hate the way i draw the legs, or the mouse legs themselves?
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...i dont like the way you draw them in general... they are unlike the concept sketches you showed me...
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oh i know, i changed the legs for the concept drawing. n_n;; actually, therw is a concept of those particular looking legs, but it was jsut one sketch compared to the others you like.
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...i should start using reverse psychology on you since you always do the opposite of what i say...
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She doesn't have an incredible sense of motion in the top two panels, adding some speed lines might help give her a more franticly moving/cramped feeling.
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black speed lines that bleed into the shadows or like, negative white speed lines?
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Definitely black for both the top panels, a negative white would dilute the wonderfully ominous inky blackness in the top right panel.
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