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This picture is for a story idea of mine called ‘Dragon Egg’. Please, if you read the description, please feel to offer advice or ideas.

Basically, it the story of Thane. He is a hunter for the West Wind Village which is situated on top of a mountain peak. His people are then attacked by dragons – a creature they have never seen - and he slays one. It turns out that there are different breeds of dragons and those were rouge. Another dragon – a PeaceKeeper – comes to rectify what had been done and rid the humans of the other dragons. Thane, not knowing this, slays the Peacekeeper as well but as the dragon lies dying; he curses the young warrior stating, “That you will replace what you have taken.”

At first, nothing seems wrong but then he notices that he has scales up his arm and terrible pains, his body being disfigured. He is banished by his village and heads out into the wild world where no human has laid foot before to find the dragons and beg for an end or to lift this curse.
Traveling along, he runs into a white talking deer that calls himself a god. The god basically says that he must crack the egg and slay the baby dragon within … this is a riddle but he takes it literally. So, when he finally comes across the home land of the PeaceKeepers, he has been so disfigured that his entire body is now hidden in a white cloak. He tries to sneak into the dragon's den and steal an egg, but ends up caught. Nobody knows who he is or what a human is for that matter. So he plays the part of a lost traveler and being PeaceKeepers they allow him to stay … and the rest of the story is one of man vs. self after the egg has hatched. He does not know if he should continue to allow himself to turn or to kill the little beast that seems to admire him so much.

Edit:

I finally started putting chapters up. You can find them on Fictionpress [link] .

Description
This picture is for a story idea of mine called ‘Dragon Egg’. Please, if you read the description, please feel to offer advice or ideas.

Basically, it the story of Thane. He is a hunter for the West Wind Village which is situated on top of a mountain peak. His people are then attacked by dragons – a creature they have never seen - and he slays one. It turns out that there are different breeds of dragons and those were rouge. Another dragon – a PeaceKeeper – comes to rectify what had been done and rid the humans of the other dragons. Thane, not knowing this, slays the Peacekeeper as well but as the dragon lies dying; he curses the young warrior stating, “That you will replace what you have taken.”

At first, nothing seems wrong but then he notices that he has scales up his arm and terrible pains, his body being disfigured. He is banished by his village and heads out into the wild world where no human has laid foot before to find the dragons and beg for an end or to lift this curse.
Traveling along, he runs into a white talking deer that calls himself a god. The god basically says that he must crack the egg and slay the baby dragon within … this is a riddle but he takes it literally. So, when he finally comes across the home land of the PeaceKeepers, he has been so disfigured that his entire body is now hidden in a white cloak. He tries to sneak into the dragon's den and steal an egg, but ends up caught. Nobody knows who he is or what a human is for that matter. So he plays the part of a lost traveler and being PeaceKeepers they allow him to stay … and the rest of the story is one of man vs. self after the egg has hatched. He does not know if he should continue to allow himself to turn or to kill the little beast that seems to admire him so much.

Edit:

I finally started putting chapters up. You can find them on Fictionpress [link] .