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Whetsit-Tuya [2013-09-21 23:32:38 +0000 UTC]
Looks amazing but her arms are extremely long (the elbows go slightly above the waist and the hands go slightly above the mid thighs)
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LadyCerbero [2011-01-11 13:00:24 +0000 UTC]
impressive!
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dhomokilly [2010-12-01 06:02:24 +0000 UTC]
OMG this is so great!
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CHVR [2010-11-02 15:46:12 +0000 UTC]
Your style is gritty and bleeds with a cold dead atmosphere, I love it! You've Been Watched!
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patrickuhl In reply to CHVR [2010-11-02 22:42:48 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, I am pleased to hear that.
And for the watch!
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zfatal [2010-09-12 23:44:36 +0000 UTC]
Hm. Really talented work here. It has a grungy realistic feel, which I'd say is the result of the line art already having that feel, and the two-dimensional lightning. The awesome colors detract nothing from it, but I'd say it would have turned out better without the lightning at all.
I envy your illustrating capabilities.
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patrickuhl In reply to zfatal [2010-09-13 20:37:52 +0000 UTC]
Thanks!
Dunno, some others mentioned the lightning, and I might work on it some more if I find the time. at the moment it just doesn't blend in like the rest.
Thanks, still learning here, And it will never stop I'm afraid...
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Plasmaterial [2010-09-08 14:54:49 +0000 UTC]
Looks a lot like the possible front cover to a short story I'm writing for somone called The Wirethrone Institute
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patrickuhl In reply to Plasmaterial [2010-09-08 19:35:11 +0000 UTC]
cool, tell me more about it.
And what should be different in the picture?
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Plasmaterial In reply to patrickuhl [2010-09-08 19:50:56 +0000 UTC]
It's an unofficial sequal to someone elses short story, and it is probs gonna be six or seven parts long. This image works well because the whole thing is set in the crater in a mountain where this strange slave-producing institute is based, and one of them, Crystal (now called Dark Crystal) escapes and turns the others into super-weird servants to battle her original "owner." The Figure looks like it could be Dark Crystal.
The only thing you'd need to change in this pic to make it fit PERFECTLY is make the figure have long hair that just hangs straight down, make them it "more obviously a female" (or make them female if they aren't supposed to be) and make the blade look like it's growing out of their arm rather than a separate object. Other than that, can't fault it and it could seriously be the perfect front cover for the series :3
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Plasmaterial In reply to patrickuhl [2010-09-09 13:50:20 +0000 UTC]
And yeah, that's what I mean by "more obviously female." Don't blame me, invented Crystal made her have giant boobs anyway, I'm just modifying his character when I made Dark Crystal for the story.
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Plasmaterial In reply to patrickuhl [2010-09-09 13:45:11 +0000 UTC]
First part of the story: [link]
If you do change it, keep this version too, and use it yourself, it's just my idea of how it could be used is very different from yours.
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Plasmaterial In reply to patrickuhl [2010-09-09 20:12:11 +0000 UTC]
Ok, if you like it, then please do consider making a version for me too :3
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Plasmaterial In reply to patrickuhl [2010-09-10 22:46:34 +0000 UTC]
Sorry, but is aimed at a slightly different audience to what you may have been expecting, cause made her have a fetish about the stuff, and I just tried to serve that perpose well for him and that particular audience. See, she got locked up for a horny reason, and kinda went down that weird pathway. That said, I may re-write it one day without the whole "latex" thing going on, but for now just bare with it.
Anyway, that's ok. I wasn't actualy expecting head-sized bongas to be fair, but I just didn't want her flat chested. It contradicts the charecter.
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patrickuhl In reply to Plasmaterial [2010-09-10 22:51:53 +0000 UTC]
Yeah I kinda expected as much...
So, what would you like most? character pose, background/location stuff like that.
sure sure, she won't need a sign on her with: "this is the front"
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Patty1234 [2010-09-06 13:23:51 +0000 UTC]
Facility 208. It had always been a symbol of ill will, a dark blot on the past that nobody liked to talk about. The more superstitious folk often muttered curses or mantras whenever they caught sight of it on the horizon, or if the booming of its machines drifted over the hills at night. No one was truly sure of its purpose - only that it was something evil, a remnant of the supercity that had once sprawled across the continent. No one knew for sure why it was still active. Most didn't care, as long as it didn't interfere with their own existence. However, stories say that the scientists are still alive, and they are searching for one of their experiments. A great and terrible entity - something that these scientists of the First Age had created.
When the Experiment was completed, there were celebrations. After so many failures, a breakthrough at last! It stayed in the Facility, meekly obeying orders, being groomed and conditioned to be an unstoppable weapon. It learned quickly - it had been built to do so.
What they didn't know is, they trained it too well. They trained her too well.
She soon became self-aware, and began to question her existence. Fragments of a past life flitted through the dark of her subconscious, just out of reach. Almost as if she had been different - As if there had been something else, someone else, a personality - now replaced with cold steel, and an emotionless, calculating logic core.
When these answers were denied, she escaped. It was hardly difficult - she was a product of Facility 208; she knew it inside out. They couldn't stop her - of course they couldn't. They built her to be unstoppable... and she was. The scientists then began their long search for her - they dropped all of their current projects, and threw all of their resources behind relocating her.
At the same time, the very war she had been built to fight came to the supercity - a deadly, tailored virus was released into the population by a foreign suicide operative. The people turned to the scientists of Facility 208 for a cure, but they were so desperate to find their creation, the cries for help were ignored. As the infection took hold, civil war broke out in the supercity. Society became lost in a spiral of rioting, violence, and self destruction. The scientists continued to frantically search for their creation, ignoring the screams of the dying as the supercity broke down around them.
Eventually, there was nothing left of the supercity, but still the scientists carried on. When the fuel cells which powered the Facility ran dry, they built machines that pulled the lightning out of the sky as an alternate fuel source. If a system failed, they replaced it with a biological equivalent, reverse-engineered from the technology used to create the Experiment.
Years and years passed.
The Experiment, after escaping the infection, had been doing her own searching.
Learning. Growing.
But she could never find the answers she so desperately hungered for. Nor would she stop until she had them. There was only one avenue of investigation left - Back at Facility 208.
The Experiment is coming home.
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patrickuhl In reply to Patty1234 [2010-09-06 13:30:01 +0000 UTC]
O_O
That
that
is so awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That's going to be the description for sure!!!
.....speechless...
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Patty1234 In reply to Patty1234 [2010-09-06 13:24:29 +0000 UTC]
hows that for a bitchin' backstory? ;D
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patrickuhl In reply to EikoShido [2010-09-06 10:23:32 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! and yes the blade was inspired by B.A.A.
Thanks for the fav tooo!
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Two-Shadowed [2010-09-05 06:48:07 +0000 UTC]
Wonderful!!! like coloring and especially the dark building)
But i think that lightning in the background should not be so bright as in the foreground for more clear distribution of plans)
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patrickuhl In reply to Two-Shadowed [2010-09-05 10:09:14 +0000 UTC]
thank you!
Yeah I'm gonna work on the lightning. thanks for the tip!
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unholyVice [2010-09-05 01:55:04 +0000 UTC]
ohmyF***ibg Gosh!! This is beyond amazing!! The effects in this pic are awesome!
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Joey1058 [2010-09-04 18:21:07 +0000 UTC]
Awesome blue metallic effect! I really like the intricate pattern on her weapon. Nice balance in the armor. "Facility 208" looks amazing! It had to take you forever to get the scaffolding just right. My one minor critique: rather than many bolts of lightening, I would have had a single streak from right corner, passing in front of her, and striking the tower. But hey, you convey the message here, regardless! She's obviously looking to rectify some wrong somewhere!!!
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kahalle [2010-09-04 01:35:33 +0000 UTC]
Badass mercenary chick is badass, and she is about to take down the giant corporation with the floodlights in the distance. She looks like an escaped scientific experiment. I think she has a personal grudge against that building.
Also her mere proximity causes lightning storms. Because she's just that badass.
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patrickuhl In reply to kahalle [2010-09-04 21:44:43 +0000 UTC]
That was such a badass comment, I like it!
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