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L1lly-flow3rX [2011-12-27 23:41:49 +0000 UTC]
Good for a first try, this came out better then my first drawing of a person. lol xD
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AI-100 [2011-12-27 06:49:11 +0000 UTC]
One arm is much smaller then the other.
you drew out the cancer symbol pretty neatly though.
All the various body parts don't really feel like they connect.
But it's very clean.
His face is drawn using a set of symbols and it doesn't really feel like you know the anatomy of the face well enough to pull that off.
The cloth wrinkles are clean though, they don't fit well though.
I know you're proud of it but maybe you should look more at human beings and practice, studying from a book wouldn't hurt either, I recommend these books from The famous artist's course.
Drawing the head and hands
[link]
Drawing Clothes Draperies and Costumes
[link]
Drawing the human Form (this focuses on the main major building blocks of drawing the figure, not the specific anatomy of a figure.)
[link]
And Artistic Anatomy ( this focuses on the specific anatomy of a figure, not the main major building blocks of drawing the figure)
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Pastry712 In reply to AI-100 [2011-12-27 23:13:44 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for the critique. It always feels good when someone takes the time out to type it up.
Yes, I made the left arm a lot smaller to try and make it look like perspective.
For the cancer symbol, thank you.
Yes, I could not decide how to draw him so that is probably why it doesn't seem to fit very well.
Um, I don't understand what you mean by 'using a set of symbols', but yes, I think my sense of anatomy overall isn't very good. -u-'
I know I should practice more, and hopefully I will have more time to.
Once again, thank you for the critique and comment.
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AI-100 In reply to Pastry712 [2011-12-27 23:16:07 +0000 UTC]
By symbols i mean this
[link]
Good luck an practice n shit lol
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Pastry712 In reply to AI-100 [2011-12-27 23:19:27 +0000 UTC]
Ohh alright. Thank you. : D
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