pasta-in-a-tree [2006-05-17 00:28:42 +0000 UTC]
wow good job! great describing the ecstasy of playing piano.
on the last line it seems a little out of time. maybe you could have something like
Soon I'll continue in my attack,
Of white then black, White then black.
but its a minor thing i really like this!
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