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Published: 2006-05-17 00:25:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 55; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 4
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Description Piano

Black then white, Black then white,
Both a part of a glorious flight,
Of nimble fingers on yielding keys,
And when I set down to these,
I find myself lost in flying notes,
And in awe of those who wrote,
The music I am sucked in by,
The music which gives me wings to fly,
Eventually, though, I come to a slow,
And it is with pain that I go,
But I know someday I will return,
For there is always more to learn,
Soon I'll continue in my attack,
Of White then black, White then black.
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Comments: 4

pasta-in-a-tree [2006-05-17 00:28:42 +0000 UTC]

wow good job! great describing the ecstasy of playing piano.
on the last line it seems a little out of time. maybe you could have something like

Soon I'll continue in my attack,
Of white then black, White then black.

but its a minor thing i really like this!

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panthababe09 In reply to pasta-in-a-tree [2006-05-17 00:39:41 +0000 UTC]

thanks! I see what you mean about the last line. I like the of-you wouldn't mind if I used it there would you?

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pasta-in-a-tree In reply to panthababe09 [2006-05-17 02:20:43 +0000 UTC]

oh no i wouldn't mind at all!

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panthababe09 In reply to pasta-in-a-tree [2006-05-17 02:27:16 +0000 UTC]

sweet! didn't think u would-but you never know!
ty!

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