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Paladin360 — MLP: Lone Star

Published: 2017-03-29 05:40:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 547; Favourites: 38; Downloads: 1
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Description His original name was, Old West, then I think his name was  odd there so I just ask my friend to help out for his name ^^ and thanks also I change his backstories aswell ^u^ anywho here his stories ^^

Lone Star, living in the The town in the desert is Western town. Which is the only desert place of the Diamond Empire. But? it lead to the outside from the Diamond Empire is Saberia the Desert kingdom of the snake. Though they have a oldest friends is Guardians, but not anymore when they saw them divided into three faction. Anyway Lone Star as a colt at the train station to visit the Diamond Kingdom for rodeo to let them see the show there. Even he like to go there and see lot of thing he never seen it before. When he in the train and arriving the Kingdom. 

Lone Star: Wow wee this is very fancy kingdom I've never seen well... my first time *walking around outside and feeling the cold* This is very cold I'm feeling *is trying to keep himself warm and hear lots of cowboy pony is sitting up on outside of City* I never felt this cold I was in the town...
Rain Cloud: *walking around and saw him* hey? *to him*
Lone Star: Huh? oh, hi ^^
Rain Cloud: So you're from the Western town on Desert, right?
Lone Star: Yeah, why are you ask?
Rain Cloud: I wanted to ask, how is it? I wanted to come visit for my first time ^^
Lone Star: Well, it is not much to do, just sitting there, doing some chores, doing some rodeo and some contest, and stuff like that ^^
Rain Cloud: Huh, that sound interesting ^^ and thanks for asking *went somewhere and talking himself* I can't wait to visit ^u^
Lone Star: Well... that something alright... huh *walking around the city and see his parents at outside of city* mom dad?
River Stream: Yes, hon? what is it?
Lone Star: When, is it done? I don't like it here, and I wanted to go back home
River Stream: Oh, well we be done in hour for the show start ^^
Lone Star: *sigh* Alright... *walking around some more again*
River Stream: Stay safe

He don't wanted to be here while he is wanted to go back home for his time. He wanted to be alone and relax him self out without bothering him. When he saw the statue in the middle on front of the palace which he never seen her before

Lone Star: I never seen this statue before... *saw her name and reading it* Diamond Shire , founder of the Diamond Empire. Whoa, I never seen it come in... huh, I should've read about the history then, while spending alot by myself... *saw lots of Royal Guard is lining up* What's going on there? *saw king Guardian, Queen Red Rose and Paladin walking through* Huh, they most be they going to see some show

Lone Star never seen Diamond Shire before when he is spending time by him too much which he decided to read some history when he is come back home after the show is over. The show is begins when he is next to his parents.

River Stream: *nomming some hays while everypony is enjoying the rodeo which they never seen it before* this is nice tricks she using
Lone Star: Yeah, she is *starring at them*
*other side*
Paladin: I never seen this show before mom and never seen her using a rope trick too
Red Rose: Well, this is from Western from old time. They always like to come visit here, right?
Guardian: Indeed, they come here if they are feeling like it. 
Paladin: oh, ok ^^ *watching her and saw him starring* huh?
*other side*
Lone Star: Eek D: *is hiding under it*
Ander Star: What is it?
*other side*
Paladin: huh? mom and dad? can I go for some snack? *is being lied*
Guardian: Of course, son
Red Rose: *is watching him and telling he is lying* Hm... you may go ^^
Paladin: Ok *went somewhere to see him* going to see why is he starring at us*
Guardian: I know, I know. I can see he is lying *watching Lone Star family*
Red Rose: *giggle and continue watching*
*other side*
Lone Star: *stand back up and watching them* Uh... where is he? *walking away and trying to find him*

Lone Star never seen them before while they are the King and the Queen, instead Paladin saw him starring. Which he wanted to find him. Which they both are the crowded pony

Lone Star: *Found him* Uh... hi
Paladin: *is watching him* Why are you looking at us for?
Lone Star: Well, you see... I never seen you guys as a King and Queen before, heheh ^u^;;;
Paladin: Oh? well... you shouldn't stare like that though and you can come visit in the Royal Palace, just like everypony else
Lone Star: Wait? everypony visit?
Paladin: Yeah, everypony can come visit inside the Palace and see my parents, which they don't mind they come in
Lone Star: Heh, I should've visit the Palace aren't I heheh ^-^;;;
Paladin: Yeah, you should
Lone Star: Yeah... Well how is it?
Paladin: Oh the rodeo show? it's very nice which I never seen it before ^^
Lone Star: Well, you do now and which is great you like it ^^
Paladin: Yup ^^ *heard the show is over and saw his parents walk by while his mother winked him* oh snap o-o
Lone Star: Uh, what just happen?
Paladin: Well... you can come visit palace tomorrow I have to go, with my parent, bye D: *ran to his parents and next to her mom* I'm sorry for lying to you ;o;
Red Rose: Is ok, and I know you lied already to see him, right?
Paladin: oh... ._.
Lone Star: *waving at him* see you later, who ever your name is... darn, I didn't catch his name yet... well tomorrow, maybe

When Paladin met him while he is curious why he is looking like that. But he instead told him he never seen them before but he coming to visit his palace what he told him. Which he never knew everypony can visit there palace then he never realize one one rules. Don't go up stair floor. Until morning he woke up early he always do. He come visit to the palace

Lone Star: Wow, that was really shiny in there... but, where is he at? *saw Royal Guard* Um excuse me Me? I wanted to find him, he is a light blue and yellow orange mane?
Royal Guard: Him? well he in the six floor and he still sleeping, right now
Lone Star: Thanks
Royal Guard: But? you cannot go up further. And I am...
Red Rose: Guard? let him, he wanted to see him, right? *walking down*
Royal Guard: you highness *bow down to her*
Red Rose: You can see him 
Lone Star: Thanks your highness *ran up the stair case to six floor and made on top of the six floor* Oh GOSH DX How many STAIR case they have? D8 I'm getting tired of walk up the stair case DX
Paladin: *is already up with his plushie he is holding* Hi, *brushing his teeth at the Royal hall*
Lone Star: *is at the floor while being tired* Hi, ^^ just wanted to say is, this place was great and very shiny inside the palace which is super clean ^^ but... 
Paladin: Oh, to much stair case? *continue brushing his teeth*
Lone Star: Yup, that one... you guys should've put some bench here...
Paladin: Oh, ok I noted. So do you like to show around?
Lone Star: Yes, I love to but I didn't catch you name, yet
Paladin: Oh, I'm Paladin and you are?
Lone Star: Nice to meet you Paladin, and I'm Lone Star from the Western Town ^^ so shall we begin?
Paladin: *teleport his plushie and tooth brush away* ok let start

When, he starting showing around inside the Palace, which he never seen it like it. Which Lone Star told him he never met, Diamond Shire. Paladin Gladly to show him to go to the library room. When he saw the book of history, and now he understand everything now when he read. A few day later they become friends  which he is going back home town

Lone Star: I see you later, Paladin
Paladin: Same as you, Lone Star, and someday, I might visit you sometime
Lone Star: Heh, same as always ^^ well someday you might make more friend what you told me 
Paladin: Yeah... well someday, though ^^
Lone Star: *hearing the trains is about to leave* Well this is it then *went to the trains and waving* Bye friends
Paladin: Bye, Lone Star come and visit me some day...

Which is how he met him during the rodeo show at night time when he is talking to him while why he is looking at them.  but further future away

Lone Star message: Hey Paladin? I was writing this for thanks for being my friends, which I never had one while I was always being my self alone. But when thanks for the Rodeo show, right while looking at you guys that way? heh, and After day? I told you don't visit me while you hate hot in my home town. I see your look of your face there for lots of sweat. But good thing is I give you a cold drink, right? and I also I was surprise you've made many friend so far. Which I talking to you old friends, which is she is pretty nice ^^ anyway I have to go, bye
*end message*

Paladin friends from OC backstories

M=Mare                                 P= Pegasus
S=Stallion                              U= Unicorn
E= Earth

(M)(E) Sarina Ring  (living in Diamond Hope City) (She first met him while she walking around on the park when he being fall) [She use to live in Diamond Kingdom]
(S)(U) Aeon Light  (living in Diamond Hope City) (He second met him during at midnight and wake him up while his music is very loud) [He use to live in Diamond Kingdom]
(S)(E) Lone Star  (Living in Diamond Western) (He third met him while on rodeo in the Diamond Kingdom)
(M)(U) Star Chaser  (living in Diamond Sunset town) (She fourth met him while she taking a walk at night, by herself without any friends)
(M)(E) Sarry Tune  (living in Diamond Falls) (She Fifth met him while she on top on the rock playing some flute) [She use to live in Diamond Sea Shore City]
(M)(U) Golden Peach  (living in Diamond Falls) (She sixth met him while she's needed help gathering peach)
(S)(E) Neo Fern  (living in Sunset town) (He seventh met him while hanging around with his friend Thunder strike at the Castle) [He use to live in Diamond Kingdom]
(S)(P) Thunder Strike  (living in Cloud Citadel) (He eighth met him while hanging around with his friend Neo Fern at the Castle) [He use to live in Diamond Kingdom]
(M)(U) High Night  (living in Sunset Town) (He ninth met him met while he in the middle of the night, watching the star)
(S)(P) Cirrus Cloud  (Living in Hurricane city) (He tenth met him when he being nervous alot and never talk to no pony alot)
(M)(E) Judy  (Living in Diamond Rose City) (She eleventh met him when she is very shy and afraid) 
(M)(E) Madame June  (Living in Diamond Hope City) (She twelfth met him at the stage in the Royal Palace)

Music I've listen:
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Comments: 20

LaurentSML [2017-04-04 11:02:00 +0000 UTC]

Cool!^u^ I like how you did the sky!  Haha, how can I call him, a cowboy or a cowpony?

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Paladin360 In reply to LaurentSML [2017-04-07 03:18:05 +0000 UTC]

Thanks which is still going to working for the sky there ~w~ heh, I have know idea what to call him, but I going to call them both anyway X3

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LaurentSML In reply to Paladin360 [2017-04-11 12:32:56 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome! d^u^b/

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MillyMop585 [2017-03-31 08:09:05 +0000 UTC]

Awesome!~

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Paladin360 In reply to MillyMop585 [2017-04-01 05:52:17 +0000 UTC]

thanks I tried though for the background thingy ^^

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Comet-The-Blue-Cat [2017-03-30 19:37:30 +0000 UTC]

Very awesome  

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Paladin360 In reply to Comet-The-Blue-Cat [2017-04-01 05:52:01 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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Comet-The-Blue-Cat In reply to Paladin360 [2017-04-01 13:00:56 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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Victoria-Luna [2017-03-30 15:43:17 +0000 UTC]

Rural climates

good job

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Paladin360 In reply to Victoria-Luna [2017-04-01 05:51:53 +0000 UTC]

thanks which I tried though ^^

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Victoria-Luna In reply to Paladin360 [2017-04-02 10:02:52 +0000 UTC]

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Bio-Iridescence [2017-03-29 19:34:44 +0000 UTC]

You are welcome buddy! Glad to see him done ^^ He got to visit the palace, what a treat 

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Paladin360 In reply to Bio-Iridescence [2017-04-01 05:45:49 +0000 UTC]

Yup he sure he did ^^ which he always by himself alot on the desert ~w~ hehe X3

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Bio-Iridescence In reply to Paladin360 [2017-04-01 16:26:27 +0000 UTC]

He never by himself in the desert, there always the scorpions XD

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Paladin360 In reply to Bio-Iridescence [2017-04-03 05:06:09 +0000 UTC]

Heh, yeah XD I never thought about it there X3

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Bio-Iridescence In reply to Paladin360 [2017-04-03 05:55:57 +0000 UTC]

They're pretty friendly most of the time X3

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Golden-Notes-Art [2017-03-29 14:13:41 +0000 UTC]

Very Cool!

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Paladin360 In reply to Golden-Notes-Art [2017-04-01 05:45:10 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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Paperstain545 [2017-03-29 12:06:03 +0000 UTC]

  

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Paladin360 In reply to Paperstain545 [2017-04-01 05:45:05 +0000 UTC]

^^

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