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Published: 2016-11-12 09:43:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 2390; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 3
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forged destiny is a RWBY fanfic by Coeur Al'Aran in which the world of remnant follows the rules of an RPG. you can find it here www.fanfiction.net/s/12044591/…--------
this is how I imagine pyrrha's outfit in FD looks like. the colour of the letters is not specified from what I remember, I wanted it to look both medieval-ish and game-ish.
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I really like the hair xD
If you want to make it look game-ey, add a ring around where she's standing too, that generally helps along with the name tag above. Makes it look more old school RPG, but it makes the idea even more clear to viewers.
Turn the head slightly more toward the 'camera', and shift it to the left slightly. Right now, it looks a little jutty.
I really like the Hoplite armour
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the fic describes the names floating above but no ring under, so I stuck to the source material, but yeah, the neck are turned out a bit awkward.
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The neck and trapezoids should be thicker on a muscular woman. Left shoulder is awkward because all of the shoulder is perpendicular to the camera, whereas if the arm were depressed to hide behind her body, the shoulder would be seen at an angle (and thus partially hidden). Her sword hand is somewhat too low as well, it is very unlikely an arm that is crooked enough to hide behind her body could reach all that way down.. There is an odd inward curve on her left thigh, which I feel doesn't quite belong. Overall, she looks good though.
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I don't wanna sound like an apologist buuut
I didn't see the shoulder thing at first, my bad. as for the arm reaching down, well if fit when I sketched it I did drew the arm behind, the breastplate ends at her waistline and the skirt begins where you'd put your belt, an arm reaches to midway trough the thigh with a closed fist and she is holding it higher than the belt while also bending her back fowards.
as for the trapezoids: blissfulandfit.com/wp-content/… these type of boxer of fighter women don't seem to have them so developed.
IDK what curve on the thigh you're talking about. you mean towards the knee? I was trying to indicate the muscles in that region. should I do a V2?
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Hey, it's just critique, sometimes you gotta disagree.
Fair enough about the trapezoids, but I still believe the neck could stand to be thicker.
The curve towards the knee yes, it's real but I think it's a little too exaggerated.
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