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owlwaltz — If I were made of bricks
Published: 2010-12-10 00:28:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 146; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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Description Our clothes fall and lie where they land
As my temperature climbs under you hands.

Built me a body, a new one with wings
So I wont be trapped alone under my skin.

Take me to places that I'll never go
Let me forget the things I'd choose not to know.

All we need is the air in our mouths
We'll leave winter behind as we travel south.

I love you I love you god damn I love
Please for tonight let tonight be enough.

I'm just a girl with a heart but no home
Lend me your body and I'll make it my own.
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Comments: 5

Homerios [2010-12-10 14:18:39 +0000 UTC]

"as my tempature climbs under your hands."

Either I'm REALLY perverted or that's some good imagery. Priceless.

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GuileCato [2010-12-10 00:44:12 +0000 UTC]

I think this is real nice... When did you write this? You're a natural writer, no-one can say otherwise.

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owlwaltz In reply to GuileCato [2010-12-10 00:54:16 +0000 UTC]

Of course you like this one, it being about you and all...

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GuileCato In reply to owlwaltz [2010-12-10 08:05:06 +0000 UTC]

I probably ought not to comment your writing anymore. I don't want to influence the way you write. From now on, it's better for you that people you don't know give their criticisms

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owlwaltz In reply to GuileCato [2010-12-10 10:05:56 +0000 UTC]

Well that's a shame, seeing as you are the only person who knows me and knows I write. At least I'll know for future reference not to show anyone else.

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