pastelphoenix [2011-10-15 17:29:30 +0000 UTC]
just beautiful....
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bronsautracks [2011-05-10 15:01:49 +0000 UTC]
lovely. no negative thoughts on this. the flow is smooth and your word choices are remarkable. it makes me kind of nostalgic. all in all, a great piece.
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owlwaltz In reply to bronsautracks [2011-05-11 14:32:47 +0000 UTC]
Thank you lady (: I've never edited something so much! Still not that keen on the ending...