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oukaofthemoon — Confused, Bewildered
Published: 2005-12-31 01:20:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 75; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 3
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Description Confused,
Bewildered
I wonder why you left me,
was it my fault,
did I not give you what you wanted
or did you not love me the way I loved you
Was I too clingy,
or did I not give you your space

Confused,
Bewildered
Contemplating reasons why I loved you
You never truely loved me
You were never open with me,
And you never truely cared about me,
You just used me

Confused,
Bewildered
I finally gave up on loving you,
I finally gave up on questioning you,
I finally gave up on you.
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Comments: 11

PencilScraps [2006-01-10 22:26:54 +0000 UTC]

Wonderful. I know exactly the feeling. But life goes on, right?

Awesome job.

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oukaofthemoon In reply to PencilScraps [2006-01-10 23:35:08 +0000 UTC]

right...i guess

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hardcorescoot [2005-12-31 04:35:37 +0000 UTC]

It made me feel lonely, and wanting. Which is kinda neat becuse sometimes that is hard to do If your writing from an expierence that not many others have had, or felt the same way about. I like it, and if I ate it, it would probly be tasty.

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oukaofthemoon In reply to hardcorescoot [2005-12-31 06:28:36 +0000 UTC]

Thanx

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oukaofthemoon In reply to hardcorescoot [2005-12-31 06:28:17 +0000 UTC]

Thanx Scoot.

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TheArtofAltercation [2005-12-31 03:55:00 +0000 UTC]

That.. is me and Danica.

I'm sorry, I must apply that poem to myself.

That.. was.. me and Danica.

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oukaofthemoon In reply to TheArtofAltercation [2005-12-31 04:18:32 +0000 UTC]

It's ok...i really don't mind...

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Kira-Lightheart [2005-12-31 01:36:39 +0000 UTC]

good poem...

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oukaofthemoon In reply to Kira-Lightheart [2005-12-31 01:38:57 +0000 UTC]

Thanx Kira.

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egriz [2005-12-31 01:21:36 +0000 UTC]

That's a really cool poem. ^_^ I like it- It's more than okay, in other words! Wonderful job .

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oukaofthemoon In reply to egriz [2005-12-31 01:38:28 +0000 UTC]

Thank you much.

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