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Published: 2010-01-20 00:41:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 231; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 4
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Description Dancing the dancers dance,
Left right left,
Rhythm her canvas,
Body her brush…

Sitting first row in,
A man simply gazing,
Captivated by beauty,
Excited while she performs…

Fiery red hair follows her body,
Green eyes looking forth,
The next step,
The next spin…

He keeps his eyes focused on her,
Prancing from foot to foot,
Imagining dancing beside her,

The song finishes,
She stops in place,
And takes a bow…

He stands and claps,
When she rises their eyes meet,
And for a brief second,
The room feels empty,

Except for the dancer,
And the man in the first row…
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Comments: 5

regina35nocis [2010-01-21 00:14:37 +0000 UTC]

Fantastic work very expressive and captivating, my favorite line was..."Rhythm her canvas, Body her brush…

sorry that it didn't work out with that person, but hey there are plenty other people out there to choose from .

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Orunitia In reply to regina35nocis [2010-01-22 06:54:12 +0000 UTC]

oh yes plenty of other people lol. still single and ready to mingle! i learned how to salsa and the girls love it! LOVE IT!

how are you these days anyways?

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regina35nocis In reply to Orunitia [2010-01-23 03:00:18 +0000 UTC]

cute, it rhymes (still single and ready to mingle ^^) Salsa dancing, that's really cool. wish i knew how to salsa dance, to be honest I have hmmm... issues when it comes to dancing anything were you need to be lead by a partner. You know control issues and all that, perhaps someday i will learn to dance salsa. I've been doing well, how about you? Besides salsa what have you been up to?

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Orunitia In reply to regina35nocis [2010-01-23 16:02:27 +0000 UTC]

in salsa girls follow. thats also true for bachata and meringue.

its been raining pretty hard core over here past few days. i almost lost my car on the freeway! totally scary whole thing was sideways at 55-60mph. but i am a super badass driver so i recovered with no problem and no accident lol.

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regina35nocis In reply to Orunitia [2010-01-23 20:25:14 +0000 UTC]

oh I know, that's why I don't dance any of those lol. Control issues and all, the guy usually gets mad at me for leading him. Man, sounds really bad, I'm glad you got threw it . be careful and stay safe

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