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Orunitia — Alumination by flame
Published: 2004-11-30 01:00:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 54; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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Description Taking shelter from the cold,
We hudle still near the fires edge...
Our breath takes flight through the dark air...
We smile in delight as we warm...

Holding still and fighting cold,
And the fire flickers and sheds its light...
In the background two dark figures take shape,
One grabs the others hand and dances in the light...

As we sit the fire burns,
As we sit our shadows dance,
As we sit we fall to sleep...
As we begin to lose our pose,
The shadows begin to slouch...

Shadows dance and begin to cry,
One shouts with its last might...
"I love you dear until next night"

The fire fickles and fades,
The restless bodys begin to fray,
The shadows are swallowed by eternal darkness,
The loving bond is made eternal...
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Comments: 8

EllenEinkauf [2005-02-28 01:44:15 +0000 UTC]

Really beautiful poem. I love how descriptive it is and how i can see them dancing so clearly in my mind.

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Orunitia In reply to EllenEinkauf [2005-02-28 02:00:58 +0000 UTC]

thank you! i love hearing how my peices are relavent to people.

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EllenEinkauf In reply to Orunitia [2005-02-28 02:20:37 +0000 UTC]

your very welcome!

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fire-foxie [2004-11-30 21:52:43 +0000 UTC]

oh wow so lovley! ^o^

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Orunitia In reply to fire-foxie [2004-12-01 16:55:59 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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fire-foxie In reply to Orunitia [2004-12-03 00:44:03 +0000 UTC]

a welcome for u! ^___^

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Love-Loyalty-Friends [2004-11-30 01:57:26 +0000 UTC]

ooooh so gypsy like i love it! ::dances around the fire::

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Orunitia In reply to Love-Loyalty-Friends [2004-11-30 02:20:43 +0000 UTC]

Im glad you liked it. I felt like dancing and i like fire so... dancing fire sorta came to mind.

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