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arjuu-na [2011-01-04 16:24:36 +0000 UTC]
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Excellent work overall! I see you have great potential - kudos to you for producing a very complex work!
I like your cel-shading and the application of the concept of shadows - very simple, uncluttered and quite pronounced. I think this is the main attraction of your work here. This is recurring quality I see in the other works in your gallery - so keep it up! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/t/t… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title="Thumbs Up"/> The way you placed the characters and gave emphasis on Gohan by drawing him full-body also gives a powerful effect on the theme and message you're trying to convey to your audience here. The layout, too, works for the piece because it's simple and quite uniform in nature.
The only thing I'd like to point out in this piece is that you keep improving your anatomy - though you did get the basics right, the anatomy still seems a little bit odd to me. The shoulders here is a little off - it's a little too broad. Since Gohan here is, technically, 11 during his battle in the Cell Saga, figuratively his shoulders shouldn't be that broad - you can try to make it a little smaller, as you can see in these examples:
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*Take note of how the shoulders look like on Gohan and how his physique looks quite slender and less muscular despite his ascending to Super Saiyan/Super Saiyan 2.
Overall, a very excellent work. Keep on creating, give more practice and emphasis on anatomy, and you'll be well on your way in growing to be a great artist!
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animefan245 [2011-11-16 20:31:38 +0000 UTC]
i like the way you drew cell ^^
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madamxaela [2011-01-06 21:51:53 +0000 UTC]
#17 and #18 are supposed to have the same color eyes.
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orijun In reply to madamxaela [2011-01-07 00:00:26 +0000 UTC]
LOL no. Check Google images. They are twins but their eye color changes a little bit.
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Smssniper [2011-01-05 03:53:44 +0000 UTC]
te freezer saga? you mean as i freiza? or do you mean cooler, im interested to know
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orijun In reply to Smssniper [2011-01-05 04:19:34 +0000 UTC]
Freezer as Frieza. It's an English translation error. In Japanese Frieza is actually Freezer, but it's pronounced Fu-Ri-Za (Frieza). Hope I helped!
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Smssniper In reply to orijun [2011-01-06 02:24:16 +0000 UTC]
really i didnt know tha it was pronounced fu ri za? well i am more intellegent now than i was 3 seconds ago
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orijun In reply to Dbzfan300 [2011-01-05 03:03:44 +0000 UTC]
Yeah! The process is in my gallery!
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Dbzfan300 In reply to orijun [2011-01-05 23:05:15 +0000 UTC]
can u check out my stuff?
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dbzfan7 [2011-01-04 21:26:59 +0000 UTC]
gohans face looks too old like hes 16 in the buu saga
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orijun In reply to dbzfan7 [2011-01-04 22:20:18 +0000 UTC]
Yeah... went too far on age D:
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dbzfan7 In reply to orijun [2011-01-04 22:30:40 +0000 UTC]
its ok i can't do any better or close
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Bloody-Damsel-01 [2011-01-04 01:34:32 +0000 UTC]
Well done with the complete saga's characters! But I have to agree with ~SSJ1stClassAeon about N° 16. Other than that, excellent drawing, quality, colors and shading.
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SSJ1stClassAeon [2011-01-04 01:26:22 +0000 UTC]
This is awesome. The only thing I really have with it is that 16 is on the villains side, granted he was an android he was still a good guy. I like how both sides are arrows pointing to Gohan pointing out how he's the hero of the Cell Games Sage. You did an awesome job on this
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