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OrcaCookie — Penciled Emonga
Published: 2010-10-07 22:38:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 1134; Favourites: 32; Downloads: 22
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i know. theres alot of left over sketch lines.this looks WAY better in real life.
all my friends seemed to really like this...
so....PLEASE CRITIQUE. what looks good, what seems off...if the design is off, dont pester me. i couldn't get direct reference at the time.
i have to admit, i really like the way it turned out.
time: approx. 2 and a half to 3 hours.
matirials: HB mechanical pencil (0.7 mm).
Emonga (c) Nintendo
Art (c) me
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Comments: 42
I think this looks Amazing.
The Sketchy-ness adds a lot of Character if you ask me.
You incorporated all the perfect shades, and I know how hard that can be.
I'd say this is A+ work, for sure.
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thank you so much!
i really appreciate it!
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I actually really love all the extra sketch lines! It gives the piece more texture, but that's just me.
As far as Emonga goes, I think it's amazing! His body is the cutest ever and I love his little feets
Some of the shading is a little off, though, especially on his forehead. It looks a little choppy.
Definitely one of my favorites that you've ever done, though. Your style is just SO CUTE.
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thank you so much! X33
yeah, the forehead is kind of off. |D
thanks for the tips!
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dflhsgkdfhgdsjgh IT'S SO CUTE *A* Holy crap. Best bat squirrel I have ever seen in my life XD Nice job |3
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WOW. I really love this too livi 8DD
I actually really like the pencil sketchy look |D
And the shading is pretty exact, too.
I think the left wing is a little deformed, but I dunno.
And the eyes!! 8DD
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thankies!
i was trying to make it folded slightly because his/her leg was lifted up.
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you know, those light things in your eyes shouldn't be like that. and the eyes are too far away from each other
other than that it's fine.
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light things...? what do you mean exactly? o3o
yeah...like i said i had no reference until after i drew it.
thank you!
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...the light source. The light sources for the eyes are different.
oh okay
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actually the lights source is the cheeks+lightning. (and the glowing wings, but that wouldn't be highlighted in the eyes.)
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but... only ONE point of the eyes? the highlighted part should be a little bigger.
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hmmm...i'm pretty sure you're right. the highlights should be bigger if the eyes are that close.
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yeah, I guess so.
(god I'm so mean ;_; )
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(lol, dont worry about it. XD)
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(lolol, thanks, I like C&Cing but sometimes I don't really want to hurt the person I'm crit-ing... ;u; )
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(i worry about that too. sometimes i worry i'm too picky. D: )
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(yeah, and that too. don't want to upset my friend ~ )
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AWWWWWWWWWWWWHHH!! *stuffs in bag, runs away*
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Well, keep in mind I don't know pokemon that well, but I'll try to point out some things. The forhead looks a little flat; just past the round face it seems to flatten (but you really can't notice it.) Her hands and body structure are lovely
Vision: 5/5
Originality: 3/5
Technique: 5/5
Impact: 3.5/5
Deviousness 
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thanks so much!
i really appreciate the critique!
and thanks for the tips also!
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Yo it's me matt, and yeah it DOES look alot better in rl lol
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It's really cute! 8D
but for some reason, the way you did the shading seems kind of off to me |:
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thanks!
how so? :3 i was doing it with the light coming from the cheeks/lightning and "glowing" wings. (do they glow? : D)
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oh, nvm X'D i couldnt see a clear light source but it makes sense now XD
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