Ito-Saith-Webb [2009-05-22 01:43:56 +0000 UTC]
Here is the critique you wanted.
The pose is a little on the static side and I think a more dynamic pose would help for such fan art. There is some nice flow with his toga wrap and the steam from the wine bottle which is also creating a nice design.
Hope that helps.
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