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OracleGlass β Panic
Published: 2006-06-20 11:17:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 313; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 21
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Put your hand between my breastsand quiet the pumping red flesh
drumming so violently in my chest
This frenzy clots my vocal chords,
blurs my vision with salty tides,
dissolves my skin in fiery shivers.
Just grant me a sip of your essence to pacify
the agonizing uproar in my depths,
just a word initiating: resetβ¦
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I actually think that this is less of a sensual and more of an emotional poem o_O
It gives me a picture of how one person can calm the chaos that tends to build up
inside us sometimes.
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you win, because you are the first one who got it
see maybe u lost ur writing mojo for a while but the comment mojo is still there 
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I find it very easy to appreciate writing right now
(especislly good writing 
But I can't seem to get around to doing it myself o_O
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I really like this one it's sexy but it's not about sex per se. I feel like it is about the power a person can have over you, knowing how love goes, the ' person' who calms the writer is probably the one who induced the panic. haha
well put together, simple but powerful and just the right amount of imagery. I like it!
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Its interesting that it always evokes the thought of sex to people, lol. Totally unintentional but there is no wrong or right. I'm glad if its triggering any images at all.
Thank you very much for ur comment
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well what can i say i think this is perhaps your most sentual and breath takeing one it is very emotional and deep just gives me chills and makes me kiss the one i love keep it up Ella your a great writer and poetress
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Whoa.. that's very very... very... ... veeerrryyy good... ;D
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Great imagery, especially in the second stanza. I like the use of half-rhyme as well, as it reflects how such feelings can distort your mind. You can really feel the panic.
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