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Ophelia-Overdose — Sleeping beauty
Published: 2010-05-06 20:53:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 57265; Favourites: 1778; Downloads: 1949
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It's a picture from a photoworkshop with jamari-lior.She made just a few pictures but I am very happy with the result so I had to post it
Futhermore it matches to my recent upload.
Photographer: jamari-lior
Model,make-up,styling: myself
**Minihat is made by me! It can be purchased here: [link] **
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Comments: 87
I love the colors and feel to this one.. VINTAGE comes to mind
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Though you are certainly a beauty, sleeping or otherwise, this photo actually leaves me with a more 'Alice in Wonderland' impression. A subtle change to from the peah tones to the iconic light blues would seal the deal. Still, love the picture.
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Your hats are all so amazing! You're a girl of many talents
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Love the colors,the shot just love the photo ! great job
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hmm, if the clock wound up (get it?) facing the cam full-on instead of away, it would probably work a little better overall.
But it still is an interesting departure from mostly dark themes in this category
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all your pictures are georgeous, that´s so amazing, it´s beautiful that there are still people that have a huge fantasy but this shot is my fav one, it´s outrageous!
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Reminds me of a Fairytale. Wish I was wearing that! (and had that clock!)
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Ахх, просто божественно!! Восхищаюсь этими работами..
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wow wunderschön,
die uhr gefällt mir auch gut
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hmm, die uhr hat mein papa in seinem laden. okay, passte nicht. wunderschönes bild, alles passt zusammen.
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Beautiful. I can't enlarge it for a closer look... so all I could critique is that the clock could perhaps been nestled better or positioned a little lower. It seems like it's being held like a teddy bear, kind of... yet the left arm seems awkwardly placed.
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Du erinnderst mich vom Gesicht her so sehr an meine Cousine Jenny. Wie kann man so ein perfektes Gesicht haben und so eine Ausstrahlung. einfach perfekt!
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of course you have a million watchers!
your stuff is amazing!
and this is one of my favourite so far!!!!!
keep it up!
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Beautiful as always!
I love this color on you, which brings me to the dream!
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Fantastic - Love the choice of the pastels in this series.
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Maybe you should just have called the picture something not referring to sleeping, and lots of the criticism here would be void ^^
It's true it doesn't look like a sleeping person, but when you don't view it with that predisposition in your head, there is no problem with your expression at all.
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I have to agree ^^
Can you imagine a better title?
Thanks
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The facial expression puts me off from loving this picture over-all.
1) I know it's been said many times to you, but the lips need some adjusting. Even if you have a natural pout/pursed lip (I think I've seen you comment somewhere before that your lips are that way naturally), you may want to try finding ways to suppress it, because for most people, it's intentional, so most viewers will assume yours is intentional too.
2) Your eyes look slightly open. It's probably the angle and the makeup, but it pulls me out of the image.
These two elements combined with an unnatural-looking sleeping pose ruin the illusion that you're asleep or even remotely comfortable; if this were a novel and I'm a reader, the contract of intentional suspendd belief has been broken and I feel dissatisfied.
I hope that is helpful to you, Ophelia. To end on a positive note, I've been watching your submissions intently for quite some time now, and I want to compliment you on the immense creativity of your costumes, hair styles, backgrounds and themes. It's very inspiring.
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The whole thing is truly beautiful. Wowowowowowowowowowowowow!
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well...I don´t have premium user to post a critique but I will do it here....
I really like all of your stuff...some more than others, but in global it´s really atractive for me... I like the costume and accesories you use to set up the scene, and of course the model has an intresting face for compleate the global identity of the photos or scenes
Really inspiring and enjoyable to see.
Claudio
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Thank you so much.
I hope you know that I am the model on every picture in my portfolio?!
Greetings!
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Going along a little with some others, I think that the setup is very soft and attractive, but a few things are off. The clock arm looks very propped, and really doesn't give a feeling that I think you're trying to convey. Also, along with le-dame, you could show your face more upwards and close your mouth more, it looks immature and takes the focus from your facial features and puts it on other things like the hat. I hope I didn't make a sore spot, but those are the outstanding things I saw.
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how cute!!
i have to ask where you get your costumes ?
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Thanks
The corset is from ebay
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welcome
cool i made my own corset it is really hard to get on cuz i made it out of a pear of old boots i had.
i will have to take a photo soon of the corset i made.
very cool.!!!!
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