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Published: 2009-05-24 04:55:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 174; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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colored pencils on watercolor paperedit: sorry about the double notification. the previous image was low quality and didn't look anything like the actual picture
harsh critique is encouraged. I already know that the eyes are messed up in more ways than I can count; the right nostril, top of the head, and bottom lip are misshapen; the jaw extends too far to the right; the hair is hair color is out of place, and the buttons are sloppy, but please point out anything else you notice
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Comments: 9
love the colors
love the detail
overrall I just love it
this is really beautiful
there are parts of it I love specifically, like the colors, but the lines in the shirt, how they are red against the green, it is just really cool
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thank you <3
hope sarina thinks so too
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Hmmm...
Well, I think the hollow of the collarbone is a little high, and the ear is a little sticky-out-ish (but some people's are like that irl, so what do I know), but otherwise, it's looking good! Bold use of color, especially on the lips.
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wow, you're right about the collarbone, how did I not notice that? and yeah her ears are actually like that haha though it might be a bit exaggerated
thanks
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You know, I did not notice any of those things until I read your comment.
-bats-
You are too harsh on yourself.
/i/ think it looks fantastic.
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nahh, I just want to improve
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Ooh, very nice! I like the texturing in the hair.
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