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Published: 2010-07-26 03:35:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 430; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 12
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BLAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH

Yeah.....whatever.
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bds1313 [2010-07-26 06:43:13 +0000 UTC]

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the impact i get from this is immediate.the colors are perfect. i get the emotion from the colors and from the speed of the technique.the simple shapes and low amount of detail works great together. it has a childrens book feel to it. normally coloring outside the lines is a no no but i like it. i one thing i do want to see more of i a slightly more complete sky, just to bring me in all the way. other than that it has a over all great feel and a strange comfort. awsome work. cant wait to see more.great job.

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Okamichu In reply to bds1313 [2010-07-26 07:09:46 +0000 UTC]

Ah! Thank you! I draw really messy and quickly, and I'm never very deep with the details. I'm really glad you like it and got emotion from it--however, when you say a more complete sky, what exactly do you mean? I'll try to do it next time.

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bds1313 In reply to Okamichu [2010-07-26 23:29:20 +0000 UTC]

its all good. well when i was looking at it the image seemed to break off near the clouds,instead of fading out or a smooth rendering.i think if the clouds were slightly more abundant but not over done it would be perfect. agin i love the colors!

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Okamichu In reply to bds1313 [2010-07-27 00:01:54 +0000 UTC]

Ah, I see what you mean. I'll remember that next time! thanks!

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SourpatchGirl30 [2010-07-27 00:00:14 +0000 UTC]

This is different from your usual work, and I like it! ;3 It's a lot more sketch-y coloring than usual. The clouds are really pretty since there so smokey. Both the person and the wolf are a little stiff, especially the person, but it's no biggie, and I can't really be saying anything about people looking stiff.

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Okamichu In reply to SourpatchGirl30 [2010-07-27 00:11:17 +0000 UTC]

Ah, thank you I had fun with this, and I did it very quick and very loosely, as an opener into my new sketch-pad. I can see that the boy and his dog are quite motionless, and I get whatcha mean, so I'll probably work on loosening up the characters in my later works XD

Thanks for the fav!

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SourpatchGirl30 In reply to Okamichu [2010-07-27 00:13:59 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome! Loose-ness is good when it comes to art. :] That's good! No problem!

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Okamichu In reply to SourpatchGirl30 [2010-07-27 00:20:40 +0000 UTC]

;3

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CamaroLuver15 [2010-07-26 07:40:19 +0000 UTC]

i like it! fits nicely

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Okamichu In reply to CamaroLuver15 [2010-07-26 07:40:49 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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KaeLedbetter [2010-07-26 03:45:06 +0000 UTC]

D'oh gosh it's Rick Astley

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Okamichu In reply to KaeLedbetter [2010-07-26 03:50:40 +0000 UTC]

XD

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KaeLedbetter In reply to Okamichu [2010-07-26 03:54:35 +0000 UTC]

This picture is wooonderrrfullll~~~

Although his posture is a lil...off :F

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Okamichu In reply to KaeLedbetter [2010-07-26 03:58:01 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

I'm sure the posture is off XD I didn't use ANY references for this at all. ahem.

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KaeLedbetter In reply to Okamichu [2010-07-26 04:03:22 +0000 UTC]

it's good for no references!

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SpaceShipEarth [2010-07-26 03:41:45 +0000 UTC]

I like it

here is my Critique you could have put the man in the image petting the dog and the dogs tails with some movement marks around the tail.

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Okamichu In reply to SpaceShipEarth [2010-07-26 03:45:12 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! In my non-comic works, I tend not to do much in the way of creating movement markings. I don't like the way they look outside of a comic, etc. If I want to create movement I'll do it otherwise. This picture was supposed to be still and lonely.

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SpaceShipEarth In reply to Okamichu [2010-07-26 03:46:53 +0000 UTC]

IN that case you hit the mark

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GekkouKitsune [2010-07-26 03:41:27 +0000 UTC]

I just like the way this looks in general. The clouds look smokey and it looks like the wind is blowing.

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Okamichu In reply to GekkouKitsune [2010-07-26 03:44:14 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, sir!

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GekkouKitsune In reply to Okamichu [2010-07-26 03:45:08 +0000 UTC]



You're welcome :3

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