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Carpenter1026 [2006-09-25 03:56:56 +0000 UTC]
I enjoy the vantage point from which this piece is executed but I do feel that it lacks the darkest dark that would give it a powerful contrast. With that contrast I feel you would gain a more powerful movement and possible focal point. It seems most of the importances lies within the can of sorts and yet it would seem that the girl should be more important. That just may be my preference because I do like the mystery it gives with it being the other way around. I also question your structure for this piece leaving a empty portion to the surface in the bottom left hand corner, I have no solution other than a possible addition of some kind of environment or indication of line to add to the movement away from established focal points and then the motion to return to those focal points. I fear I have gone on to long, I do not mean to be harsh but moreso helpful because I too love drawing and it seems you have a talent at it. Please if you have any comments for my drawings I would love for you to critique my work, for that is the only way we should get better I believe. I do enjoy your drawing and the handling of the clothing or else I would not have listed it as one of my favorites. I just urge you to continue your persuit of more drawings that I can observe and enjoy.
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ogayar00 In reply to Carpenter1026 [2006-09-27 21:03:46 +0000 UTC]
Well...
I am charmed with the study so deep that you have done on this piece. You have been very objective and careful at the moment of entering details of technologies, depth, movement... as well as the meaning that might have of one or other one forms.
Really I like to give a message and that is caught. Providing that such a message comes, I leave of side the puntualizaciones and shades of the work. I feel that going deeply more it might extract him more divided but I am limited to the message in question. Do not worry, I will enter thoroughly your page and will see your work thoroughly.
A great greeting
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Carpenter1026 In reply to ogayar00 [2006-09-28 05:45:19 +0000 UTC]
Well Thankyou, I look forward to your comments.
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7Monstrance [2006-09-24 17:09:19 +0000 UTC]
expressive........
this makes me feel sad.......
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ogayar00 In reply to 7Monstrance [2006-10-03 07:08:01 +0000 UTC]
yes...
it,s very expressive for me...
thank you
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ogayar00 In reply to AlMaNeGrA [2006-09-01 11:01:33 +0000 UTC]
cierto... quizΓ‘s lo haga mas adelante
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MonAliciA [2006-08-29 18:28:12 +0000 UTC]
very beautiful
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ogayar00 In reply to MonAliciA [2006-08-29 20:20:26 +0000 UTC]
gracias alicia
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pilar-deadstar [2006-08-29 17:00:35 +0000 UTC]
That is so beautiful!
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ogayar00 In reply to Moniki [2006-08-29 21:00:13 +0000 UTC]
THANK YOU MONIKI
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ogayar00 In reply to VanS3n [2006-08-29 20:57:44 +0000 UTC]
THANK YOU VANS3N
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zeldis [2006-08-27 22:28:20 +0000 UTC]
Imprescionante!felicidades del corazon!
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insensata [2006-08-27 21:03:13 +0000 UTC]
muy tierno y triste
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ogayar00 In reply to insensata [2006-08-29 20:56:00 +0000 UTC]
SALUDOS INSENSATA
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ogayar00 In reply to inta [2006-08-29 20:55:12 +0000 UTC]
THANK YOU VERY MUCH INTA
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ogayar00 In reply to Psycolady [2006-08-27 17:14:10 +0000 UTC]
tΓΊ tambiΓ©n lo eres
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