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Published: 2020-03-28 01:11:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 1075; Favourites: 34; Downloads: 0
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Description Sharon's younger brother, roughly 18-19 years of age. He's a pure, soft, sweet Kartoffel trying to figure it out in a prejudiced, disinterested world. Graduated top of Gymnasium schooling and was shortly barred from university after being enthusiastically accepted. Settled for a job as an editor for a publication and was well liked before he was forced to leave. On top of that, his sister has been missing for months, rumored to have been taken, brutalized, and murdered by SS thugs. Becoming bitter, the only solace he found was in the illegal underground boxing competitions he frequented and often excelled (but strategically throwing a few fights because people would get angry to losing to a Jewish fighter). Before long, friends from school approached him, looking to recruit a new, enthusiastic member of their resistance group - to which he readily agreed. His first job? Infiltrate the local SD Intelligence Agency office.

He's really just a brilliant, nice guy. A little impulsive and youthful; and not nearly as jaded as his sister (and therefore more susceptible to corruption by vile scheming philosopher-interrogators).

Hans Valdemarr Becker (Reductio ad Absurdum, or "a story of decay") © Darklordrinku
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hatpin-understudy [2020-09-18 22:39:13 +0000 UTC]

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offscreen-scream In reply to hatpin-understudy [2020-09-25 07:54:36 +0000 UTC]

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adelkakochova45 [2020-05-29 06:31:01 +0000 UTC]

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Rikitza [2020-04-12 18:59:24 +0000 UTC]

good work and I also was inspired by "your avatar" when visiting Paris last time (before the corona) :

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offscreen-scream In reply to Rikitza [2020-04-13 06:31:49 +0000 UTC]

Yes! The L'Express cover that caught my eye! I am very glad to see it as it appears in its native country, even as an advertisement. It's just the loveliest rendering of the Camus photograph.

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Sleyf [2020-04-11 12:51:50 +0000 UTC]

Wow he seems like the kind of person who has so much great stuff going for him but is stonewalled constantly by the state of the world he lives in, so it’s no wonder he would accept a risky job, at least he won’t hit any glass ceilings (or so one would think in a resistance group, he may just lose his freedom and or life but I mean at least he can give it his all and not be held back!)

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offscreen-scream In reply to Sleyf [2020-04-19 00:27:59 +0000 UTC]

Yeah...that kind of frustration is bound to lead to trouble. Getting involved with such a group, even if it is just the idea of doing so, would give that kind of radical freedom to render a self-dictated effect, especially if it directly harms the perceptible source. There's something psychologically malicious in people fulfilling all the requirements with stellar marks and still being barred for things beyond their control, or just truly unreasonable things. Such a system seems to invite pushback by its very nature.

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Dragoonfliy [2020-03-30 01:13:39 +0000 UTC]

The addition of the white in the eyes just adds so much life to this. I love how you use those little highlights in your pics.

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offscreen-scream In reply to Dragoonfliy [2020-03-30 05:14:59 +0000 UTC]

I think as long as I am doodling on brightly colored, often neon sticky notes, I'll keep doing it I appreciate that it is visually effective!

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Dragoonfliy In reply to offscreen-scream [2020-03-30 22:11:16 +0000 UTC]

(Part of me would love to see what these look like BEFORE you tone them down...)

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offscreen-scream In reply to Dragoonfliy [2020-03-30 22:29:04 +0000 UTC]

Very blue   

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Dragoonfliy In reply to offscreen-scream [2020-03-30 22:31:18 +0000 UTC]

So blue!!!

I was imagining yellow, possibly those purple ones. Mad respect, those still look lovely unedited.

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offscreen-scream In reply to Dragoonfliy [2020-03-30 22:49:33 +0000 UTC]

Haha, I have those too, but they're not large enough and I'm not digging out the other colors of sticky note sketches I have, don't now where they are anyways. Thank you :3

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Dragoonfliy In reply to offscreen-scream [2020-03-30 22:50:15 +0000 UTC]

No problem!

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Laineyfantasy [2020-03-29 15:42:33 +0000 UTC]

Straight away im loving him already, love his background and the fact hes joined a resistance group to, im so interested! love his expression and his hair to, he looks quite a handsome young man!

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offscreen-scream In reply to Laineyfantasy [2020-03-30 05:13:43 +0000 UTC]

Very good!   He's our unsuspecting innocent impressionable underdog coming in from the side, with a very long way to climb. I appreciate that he comes off as appealing - these wholesome, nice types are not my usual cup of tea; nor my usual swig of schnapps. 

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Laineyfantasy In reply to offscreen-scream [2020-03-30 12:23:02 +0000 UTC]

Hehehe you like drawing the sharp rugged very stern type of characters!

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offscreen-scream In reply to Laineyfantasy [2020-03-30 13:22:46 +0000 UTC]

What can I say? It's my aesthetic 😍

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Laineyfantasy In reply to offscreen-scream [2020-03-30 13:45:59 +0000 UTC]

He and you do them very well I may be tempted to draw one of your characters for you ^^ just working on a family portrait of Paris and Alexandre

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offscreen-scream In reply to Laineyfantasy [2020-03-30 18:13:01 +0000 UTC]

I appreciate that That would be so insanely cool!! 

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Laineyfantasy In reply to offscreen-scream [2020-03-30 18:28:24 +0000 UTC]

question is who could i do so many characters which one do you think?

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offscreen-scream In reply to Laineyfantasy [2020-03-30 18:37:00 +0000 UTC]

Hmm, well, whomever you feel most comfortable: I have more exhaustive references of both Sharon and of Nikolai, so as far as they both go, there's a lot more to work from

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Laineyfantasy In reply to offscreen-scream [2020-03-30 18:57:42 +0000 UTC]

oooooh can i possibly see on of Sharon?

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offscreen-scream In reply to Laineyfantasy [2020-03-30 20:36:13 +0000 UTC]

Certainly - I could just give you the full folder with the bio & all the references I've compiled though
Sharon references and basic information
Sharon Ackermann, 
née Becker / "Jürgen Lorenz" 

Notes:
Jewish lady disguised as a Nazi man: "Untersturmführer Jürgen Lorenz".Strong-willed and assertive. Able to come up with anything/improv on the fly.INTP or ISTP personality type.Skilled in manipulating the situation to her advantage [a masterwit]Willing to get dirty and gritty. Physically strong. Terrible at cooking.Loves a good joke or prank.
Sharon Becker (Ackermann) is a young woman from a fairly successful German Jewish family. Growing up, she watched her family work hard to get to where they are at, and was highly inspired by her father's Great War military service. Frustrated by social expectations, she became a tomboy, frequently playing with t 

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Laineyfantasy In reply to offscreen-scream [2020-03-30 20:59:49 +0000 UTC]

Ooh yes please just sent me a note

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offscreen-scream In reply to Laineyfantasy [2020-03-30 22:06:52 +0000 UTC]

Aright, will do :3

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Laineyfantasy In reply to offscreen-scream [2020-03-31 12:08:35 +0000 UTC]

Yay

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MercenaryBlade [2020-03-28 13:36:37 +0000 UTC]

I can see the family resemblance alright!

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offscreen-scream In reply to MercenaryBlade [2020-03-28 19:44:19 +0000 UTC]

Then I have succeeded! Phew!

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Fiiiree [2020-03-28 08:40:55 +0000 UTC]

Tired brain is going to *French*ing explode, because it likes it XD

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offscreen-scream In reply to Fiiiree [2020-03-28 19:41:29 +0000 UTC]

Ooh, I'm glad! Haha   

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Fiiiree In reply to offscreen-scream [2020-03-28 21:13:58 +0000 UTC]

XD

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Cranash64 [2020-03-28 01:47:01 +0000 UTC]

Nice guy!  And the likeness to his sister is noticeable

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offscreen-scream In reply to Cranash64 [2020-03-28 08:15:53 +0000 UTC]

Yeah 😄 It's time I bring out the nice people, they've waited long enough. Really?! I was a bit worried I would either make his redesign look too much like her, or waaay too extremely different. Thank you!

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