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Oddzone123 — Smoke of shadow part 4
Published: 2015-01-30 19:01:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 225; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Description Elthibar was getting things ready for  the search. Merida gather her men.  As she gets her arrows. Merida. I am all set. Set for what? You know? Our search on hexar my dearest. Merida sighed and looks at elthibar. I am humblely sorry love. But I'm afraid I can't let you come along. WHAT?! Why not?
Well dunbroch needs someone to look after when I am not around. But I am lord regent. I can help you! No! I'm sorry elthibar. Besides. I don't need a repeat like what happen back at oz. let's ride! She and the men ride off. But I am lord regent! He felt a bit mad deep down. And decides to go up to his room and do some research on the Druid assassins. But Simon comes in the scene. Hello my lord. What do you want sir Simon. I am a bit busy at the moment making sure peace is alright in dunbroch. Oh yes. I understand that. Like how you brought peace at oz? Elthibar was in shock. I have no idea what you are getting at? Yes. Well. This might refresh your memories. He shows the mask. The same mask elthibar wore to slay his enemies. How? How did you find that? I have my ways my lord. Perhaps I shall let king fergus or the queen know of this? They always say that good moral is always the answear. But who knows. What do you want anyway Simon? This is an act of treason! So is murdering men! I was uh...in a war. Sure you were. By the time they hear of this. They shall make sure you suffer. Just tell me what do you want anyway? To be the head knight commander. You have let those goons of yours alistar and sir echart long enough! They are not goons! They are honorable men! So was general Marcus. You shut you mouth about him! So sad how you treated his only son. He stole all of that gold that should of been mine! And maybe if I tell the king and queen about your secret life? Well. No one ever gives three chances you know. They might even exile you. And for your princess. She would eventually tell them about your bloody rampage on the soliders. And some that were unarmed. You think you can scare me? I AM LORD REGENT! AND MERIDA WOULD NEVER TELL THEM! And if she did? Elthibar soon came to a realization. I shall give ye some time to think about my offer. Simon walks away. Elsewhere. Merida and the ellite soliders arrive to see a village now in smoke and flames from last nights attack.  My princess. We are too late. Damn! It would seem that hexar maybe one step ahead of us my lady? I know. Sir echart. Sir brian. Search for any remains? Yes my lady. The two of them done a search for them.  Meanwhile elthibar was looking at the tapastry once again. Staring into the portraits of rapunzel and euegene. After feeling a bit ashame. And wants to make amends with them. Solider. I demand a meeting with rapunzel and euegene. I need to tell them about rebuilding our old alliance once more. Of course. The solider walks away. Sending a letter to corona.
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Comments: 5

Sweetiepie2690 [2015-01-30 22:58:23 +0000 UTC]

Good chapter, once again. but you have to use speech marks because if you don't the readers wouldn't understand whos talking

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Oddzone123 In reply to Sweetiepie2690 [2015-01-31 00:49:32 +0000 UTC]

Yeah I guess your right. It's just I read novels that have lots of words with no name titles first. So I figure I would do so too. So I will think about it

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Sweetiepie2690 In reply to Oddzone123 [2015-01-31 01:13:19 +0000 UTC]

Understandable, I always write my books with speech marks and in POV like my first original book

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Oddzone123 In reply to Sweetiepie2690 [2015-01-31 01:50:27 +0000 UTC]

Anyways thanks

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Kataramac In reply to Oddzone123 [2015-02-01 01:44:29 +0000 UTC]

back I just got back from town sorry

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