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Published: 2010-05-25 15:22:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 2191; Favourites: 31; Downloads: 40
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Amazon swordgirl for Fantasy Earth Contest^^I like so much this combo in dress..*-*
Need a Wacom Intuos ;_;
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Wow! Me gustan mucho tus dibujos asi en plan fantasia con sus armaduras y sus cosas xD
de verdad, buen trabajo
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nice work, boobs r too big for my taste, but hot anyways
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Hehehehehehe, big boobs rulez! xDD
Thank u so much!^^
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boobs will always rule, lol
ur welcome
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yeah, and you can dar it very well
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Yep, the sword doesn't heavy so much xDD
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OMG
this is adorable!!!!
it reminds me a bit of .Hack characters!!!
im Lovin' it
wish ya luck and for me too!
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I think it's remember me to hack too xDDDD
Yep!!!! Good luck for everyone! :3
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Hmmmmmm... What could I say? Your work is pretty much good, but I can see some flaws:
1. If you look closely around the neck, there is somewhat something wrong where the neck and connects with the rest of the body. It could be the breasts that is the root of this flaw.
2. The breasts too, area little bit off. For starters I think they are too large. (Did you meant to make them that huge?) And also the breast on the right seems to be "sticking out" maybe move them a little bit to fit.
3. The other flaw are the eyes, correct me if I'm wrong but I can see that the eyes seem to be not equal in size and shape, making them look weird.
4. And lastly, the necklace, I can't point out where it's attached. Is it attached to the neck? (Where I can't see any strings) or to the actual breasts?
The things I liked about this piece: The color and shading of this pic, although it can be more refined stands out and gives the "epicness" of the drawing itself. But I think you should have put on stronger shading to make your work stand out some more.
That's pretty much all I can say. :3
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Well, thanks a lot of for your comment!!
It's a speedpaint (made it in only 1 hour! @_@) I'm doing one work at day to this contest and I'm little tired... u_ΓΉU It's usual make they with some wrongs.
Obviously, like author, I have some disapointed view from you in your flwas.
1.you can think that head and neck don't connect with the body cause doesn't see so much well for the pouldrom and breast, but I tell you that the pose is totally correct and u can do it perfectly in real life XD.
2. The breast is huge cause I did it huge. It's my style. Sometimes I do it small, sometimes huge. Depend of pic and rol. In this, I prefer huge. They do a mature appearence to the heroine, I think.
3. The eyes... I think they have same color, but the position it's not the same, cause the face is rotated. Never, the eyes could be in the same view.. ^^U.
4.The necklace is connected to the shirt. It's the lace that catch the corset. ^^U
In anyway, thanks a lot of for your critique ^^. <3<3
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Whoa! okay then. Thanks for your response.
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Thanks to you for your critique! Nobody in this days makes a good critique xDD
thanks again :3
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