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notjustlust — Her Perfume
Published: 2011-05-26 20:55:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 2858; Favourites: 90; Downloads: 22
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Description She bites my lip, bites her own
and there's something glorious about her
and the careless, controlled caress of her palms
I kiss the freckles, paled by maturity
beneath her autumn-eyes
and she smiles, oh God, she smiles.

I inhale the heady scent of her throat,
cigarettes and spice and that perfumed mist
she keeps in a vial of absynthe-green
beside the bed.

I wish my skin would melt
so that I could crawl into hers
and feel her pulse more clearly against my soul
I wonder how to explain this to her,
this dark-bright drowning in flames
like rough velvet
but I've lost my reason long ago
Instead, I stutter an incoherancy and she
she smiles, oh God, she smiles.
I knew she'd understand.
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Comments: 32

OhGoshIDontKnow [2013-07-11 18:43:07 +0000 UTC]

This is adorable cx

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EcstasySunset [2012-10-04 20:27:18 +0000 UTC]

Whoa!! Turn on. lol but seriously, the line "She smiles, oh God, she smiles." is really hot.

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notjustlust In reply to EcstasySunset [2012-10-04 22:14:28 +0000 UTC]

hehe well, poetry about sex should be sexy ;D

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EcstasySunset In reply to notjustlust [2012-10-05 09:47:25 +0000 UTC]

Yeah pretty much. ;D

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Rainbow-Artist [2011-07-12 19:05:55 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful, very decadent.

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fizza408 [2011-06-25 19:14:59 +0000 UTC]

toxic play!

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WendyxJones [2011-06-12 22:35:55 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful imagery and use of language. A pleasure to read.

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notjustlust In reply to WendyxJones [2011-06-15 19:19:02 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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the-balcony-scene [2011-05-28 21:32:15 +0000 UTC]

i love the repetition of "and she smiles, oh God, she smiles"

and this line is so wonderful to my ears: "cigarettes and spice and that perfumed mist"
i just keep saying it out loud, over and over.

<3

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notjustlust In reply to the-balcony-scene [2011-05-30 16:54:18 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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shebeast2 [2011-05-27 16:51:14 +0000 UTC]

xcelent!

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notjustlust In reply to shebeast2 [2011-05-27 19:31:32 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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d4rkbl4de [2011-05-27 12:34:43 +0000 UTC]

Fantastic job. Reminds me of my ex-gf whom I still love.

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notjustlust In reply to d4rkbl4de [2011-05-27 14:55:19 +0000 UTC]

Glad you liked it

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laurence1 [2011-05-27 06:12:13 +0000 UTC]

I've been raped!
This forces images and feelings right past my conscious screens before I can even consider the words I'm reading. I love it!


The adult filter on this work is really nonsense....doesn't fit.

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notjustlust In reply to laurence1 [2011-05-27 14:54:10 +0000 UTC]

haha I'm not sure whether or not I should apologise for that then Glad you liked it though!

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Crazy-Foxx [2011-05-27 04:06:09 +0000 UTC]

Gorgeous!

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notjustlust In reply to Crazy-Foxx [2011-05-27 14:53:37 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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mistydawnc [2011-05-27 03:58:26 +0000 UTC]

So beautiful.

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notjustlust In reply to mistydawnc [2011-05-27 14:53:29 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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sierra223 [2011-05-27 03:41:16 +0000 UTC]

its a fantastic poem! great job!!

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notjustlust In reply to sierra223 [2011-05-27 14:54:24 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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TheToxicPrincess [2011-05-27 02:19:23 +0000 UTC]

This is one of the greatest things I have ever read. Fantastic.

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notjustlust In reply to TheToxicPrincess [2011-05-27 14:55:01 +0000 UTC]

wow, thank you so much

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TheToxicPrincess In reply to notjustlust [2011-05-27 19:13:28 +0000 UTC]

You are very welcome

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sk8rchik96 [2011-05-27 00:29:33 +0000 UTC]

Fucking amazing.

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notjustlust In reply to sk8rchik96 [2011-05-27 14:53:13 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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runeblade5 [2011-05-26 21:00:35 +0000 UTC]

I officially love you to death

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notjustlust In reply to runeblade5 [2011-05-26 21:03:36 +0000 UTC]

haha wow, thank you

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runeblade5 In reply to notjustlust [2011-05-26 21:16:52 +0000 UTC]

Its so fucking amazing! I love you forever!

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notjustlust In reply to runeblade5 [2011-05-26 21:24:00 +0000 UTC]

aww, you really are too kind lolll

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runeblade5 In reply to notjustlust [2011-05-26 21:31:33 +0000 UTC]

no, its totally true!!!!! I absolutely love it!

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