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Published: 2006-06-02 15:37:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 153; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 9
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Here is another poem that was done in class. We were told to write a poem with two (first one 3 line, second 4 line) stanzas with each line starting with "Don't" and then the last stanza "And never ever ever"This is what I came out with.
© Nona Natalie Rae Spittell
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I love it...I want to draw like that...*starts to draw* dangit...*tries again* DaNgIt...*tries again*DANGIT!...
Love ya *mew* ^.^
P.S. How do you put an emoticon on your comment and stuff like that???
see ya later!!! ^.^
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remember, it took me just about 18 years to get to where I'm at. You're still young. Don't stress so much. *huggles imotochan*
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Nice preview image, the poem itself is interesting. One problem I had was in the last part with the 'never ever ever', it's phonetically stimulating but difficult on the eye when reading it.
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Yes, I know, but it was an assignment. *shrug* I kept it as it was.
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