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Published: 2007-08-18 22:31:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 9156; Favourites: 365; Downloads: 84
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I have written us down, typed us up, and sent us out.they will edit us, and say some parts are no good.
but I want your run-ons, your lack of punctuation; and you are so easy
on my weak binding, my damaged spine.
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Comments: 71
aww i really love it.
very awesome meaning and metaphor. filled with feeling.
<3
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I can barely say how totally awesome this is! It made me laugh out loud, and think "Aww..." at the same time, I absolutely love it. The DD is well-deserved!
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I kinda love it! but i didn't get the part about the damaged spine, i'm not that good at English maybe *-)
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The damaged spine bit, I think anyway, would be referring to how a manuscript doesn't have a binding. XD It's just peices of paper. Although it could also mean they'd been damaged, or, hurt, in the past..
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A juxtaposition of tragedy and virtue... and how one can bring about the other, this is beautiful.
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This is amazing. It's so short, yet filled with so much meaning. Excellent job!
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lovely and original - two things that are rarely seen!
well done
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Congratulations on the DD! The mastery of expression in so few words is really impressive. I really love it.
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I'm just repeating comments by now, but you really did make this great. I hope you don't mind, I sort of saw the appeal more for the actual words(which are awsome) rather than the symbolism; I mean, it is good, I guess it's just me and my issue with some metaphors. Anyway, aside from my nonsense,
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I'd never seen such two different things made into such a lovely metaphor. It is just beautiful, and with so much... love.
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Your use of metaphors is very clever and brilliant.
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YESSSSSSS!!!
Great piece, definetely. Always editing ourselves in some strange sites everywhere.
I love the idea, congrats man
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I LOVE it.
I want to share it with everyone I love.
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Congrats on the DD. I've definitely felt this way before, and I enjoy it's poignant simplicity. Nice work.
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Whooaaa I like this :U Very nice, powerful, in these few lines... Love it.
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I like this, I really do. Definitely deserves a DD. I envy you.
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i'll pretend i'm the easy run-on if your spine shall have it because i lost my binding a long time ago.
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simple and sweet. I like it.
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Beautiful, simple, elegant, expressive. Perfect
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Ordinarily, I don't like short poetry because it trails off into vagueland, but this says everything it needs to. And I like it because it reminds me of my boyfriend. Very nicely done.
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Oh, what wonderful word play! It's always great to see a poet or author get a DD. Congrats, it's well deserved.
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Sometimes imperfections are what we love most about some people.
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Many congratulations on the feature. You really deserve it with this wonderful poem. The metaphor is entirely original, which is unbelievably hard to do, and works beautifully.
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