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NitroDragonTrigger — [CTE] Ambush!!
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Published: 2015-03-01 23:57:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 611; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 1
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This is a Contest Enterie for my Nitro Sisters ContestI based it on the scene on Page 10 of her comic
which i like how she did the parts of that scene
Well here you go hope you like it Sis ^^
[Final Layer Count -- 40.]
[CTE] [2-1]
Art © done by me
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Comments: 16
I really like how the main character is posed in this piece! And you've done the outfit very nicely, you're good at clothing detail and I bet it took a long time. The building perspective is good too, if the detail on that is a little basic. Why not at more window lines? Or signs to go on the windows/shadows of mannikins or something to make it feel a little fuller?
But I think the colours and composition of other things need a little work. I saw from the comic its about 4pm when this is set so there is sunlight but in your picture it seems to be night time and so there's that glaring light coming from the shops behind him. So the shading is a little bit wrong (to quickly see what it should be like, merge all the layers of the main character together, go into the layer properties and add a gentle 'inner glow') I also think he needs a bit more shading on his eyes (not so much the pupils but the grey of the eye needs a shadow and maybe darken the lines around the eyes as the outline needs to stand out more against that very vivid green)
The background is a little basic, I can't see any mist in the original comic so not sure why you decided to use it here, it looks like its a shortcut into not having to draw the floor.
Anyway, I know this isn't a portfolio piece or anything, just wanted to say where I thought things could be improved.
It's still a good piece from you, good luck in the contest!
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thanks Ruki
wish i had some more time with it
but i still like how it came out ( 
but thanks again ^^
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Oooo, very nice! It's a cool interpretation of the original page. I love the rain and mist effect's you've got going.
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thanks Amy
yeah the mist that was the easy part lol
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Still looks pretty awesome, though. The effects add polish to a piece, so they say ^^
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hehe Why thanks you
i do try
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this is really cool, ndt!
love the scene and i'm so impressed with how much you've been posting lately. really exciting
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Thanks Silence ^^
will I try
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Wow nice work on your contest entry Nitro!
I wish you good luck!
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Thanks Kunx!
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You're very welcome Nitro! 
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Whoa-! You are uploading a lot recently! That's good news.
I really like the atmosphere of this drawing.
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Well if I didn't all you and her killing my Ear Drums again lol (just kidding)
yeah I want to keep it ^^
thanks Car I didn't think it would come out alright to be truthful
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Turned out awesome, thanks for entering my contest bro XD
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Your totally welcome Sis and thanks ^^
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