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NISHUNE β Suzaku Ibun: Chapter 1 Page 5
Published: 2012-10-28 10:18:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 2386; Favourites: 9; Downloads: 15
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Finally up!
Sorry for the long wait. This page was pretty bitchy, I had to redraw it again because the original page 5 I had planned came out ALL WRONG.
Anyways if you've noticed I've changed some things, such as the inking in Madoka's hair, which I used to do in Deleter comic, and I now did in Manga Studio. Also I changed the eyes for the girls into a more shoujo style thanks to a tutorial I found on DA. I'll link it ASAP here if anyone is interested in doing them as well.
What do you guys think? Should I go back to doing the eyes and hair like in the previous versions or is this style better???
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I'm glad you like it! And thanks for all the faves!
Oh sure, here's the link for the eye tutorial: fuugen.deviantart.com/art/Shouβ¦Β It's very simple so do try it out
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Ur very welcome and keep up the great work. Also I'm new to manga studio & Sai as well as drawing in general if u have any tips for me please let me know ok ^_^
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Well, I'm not sure how good I am at giving advice but I think the most important thing is to practice. Practice whenever you can whether it's doodling random shapes or actually practicing drawing a character you love or one of your own creations.
Also, look up tutorials here on DA and don't be shy to try some out. Granted ,maybe some won't be to your liking which is why you gotta keep trying until you find a certain style to suit you.
And last but not least, take care of yourself! This may seem a bit weird but I can assure you it's not. If you're struggling with a certain drawing, then take a break before coming back to it. Go out, relax, do what you love and then when you're ready come back to your drawing, trust me it helps!
That's basically all I got for now but if you need any more help come back to me and I'll see what I can do, ok?
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Hai I understand perfectly. I struggle with taking care of myself due to stress but I'll get through it. And thanks so much.
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You're welcome dearest! Like I said, if you need more help I'm always here 
Yup, self-care is important so please don't forget about that ever ok?
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Hai I won't and thanks again for the advice. And same to u. *huggle*
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I hope you will include the funny Tasuki scene I read about, the one with him seasick and Chichiri telling him to spin in place. XD
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Oh hell yeah, that one is gonna be included!
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Tasuki torture is always fun. XD
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P.D: SI NO LOS PONES EN CASTELLANO, solo capto una lijera idea!!!
Claro como no te acuerdas de tu amiga ( a la k se le da fatal el ingles!!!!)
Por cieto k tal estas?? como andan las cosas?? haber si kedamos algun dia y nos contamos k ya tengo noticias nuevas!
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Joer macho... e.e Vale vale, ya pondre subtitulos en castellano... Uffff... e.e;;;;
Estoy bien, trabajando en esta historieta me esta quitando estrΓ©s y tampoco tengo muchas clases asi que, no me puedo quejar. Vale pos dime cuando te viene bien quedar, yo tb tengo cosas q contar!
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I actually like this style better! I think it looks improved X3 and i noticed the eyes were different and i was like
I look forward to more!
on a separate note, i think its okay every now and then to have their mouths closed with a speech bubble, i've seen it done b4, so its not all that weird X3 just do whatever you feel comfortable ^^
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Yeah, this style screams "SHOUJO" more, ne? X3
And don't worry, me and Camron have our different ways in drawing comics. Though if you look at the comics in his gallery he usually has the charas with their mouths open when they're talking (BTW DO check out his comics. His latest story has one of my OCs in it). Though yes I have seem the closed mouth thing done as well, hence why I used it!
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I like the new picture. I cant wait to see the next one! Hmm for the eyes and hair I cant decide since they both are great.
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Aw thanks! 
Next page should be done REALLY soon since it's quite simple. Agh, I want to get to the UotFG ASAP... I really want to draw the warriors! ^^
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I can understand the rush to get to them but you must take your time since you dont want your nice drawings all rushed like. I try not to rush my work since I want it to come out good but if I rush it well it dont look so great. A friend of mine has been helping me with drawings we do together of my black butler story. If you want to see them you can check them out on my account. I tell her what I want on paper that I see in my mind and she takes it from there
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Yeah I know, that's why I'm taking so long. I'm VEEERY picky with my work (if you haven't noticed) so I try not to rush any of the pages I'm working on or else I'll regret it. Plus if I try to draw under stress it usually never works out for me. XD
Ooooo! Black Butler you say?! 
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Im sure you will like the drawings ^ ^
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I think it looks great, I don't know if its just me but I feel like its weird of them having their mouths closed while having speech bubbles.
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Well, I COULD open their mouths... But then flies would ge in and you know what happens when girls swallow flies... Or should I remind of that old rhyme about "I know an old lady who swallowed a fly?" XD
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lol, that was so random.
But I guess its a valid reason...
XD
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LOL, glad u liked it
But naw, seriously, I like to alternate. Plus in the original page Madoka's mouth was opened but I changed it in the last second because I didn't like the way it looked and I have to admit that the pouty look suits her so...
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