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Published: 2015-07-09 19:43:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 258; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 0
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Description Carey sighed. RJ would pull this kind of stunt, taking the cruiser without him. He’d just have to track the kid down.

He jogged to the intersection where RJ usually dropped him off, impressed with himself when he realized he wasn’t winded. It surprised him to see a different, bored-looking officer—not one he recognized—standing in his usual spot.

He took a step toward the officer when he saw commotion around a nearby bus stop bench. He pushed through the group of awestruck onlookers and discovered the object holding their attention.

Underneath the bench lay a dead body—his own.
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Comments: 5

WindySilver [2015-07-11 12:44:21 +0000 UTC]

Whoa! I sure did not see that end coming! Great work!

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ninjababy In reply to WindySilver [2015-07-11 19:10:41 +0000 UTC]

Yay! Thank you!

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WindySilver In reply to ninjababy [2015-07-12 10:24:05 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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PsychoPath-et-ic [2015-07-10 01:49:11 +0000 UTC]

Very interesting twist.  Honestly, I was surprised that it ended so abruptly, but you managed to pull it off in such a short amount of words.  I wanted to read more.

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ninjababy In reply to PsychoPath-et-ic [2015-07-10 16:31:34 +0000 UTC]

When I picked the 101 word limit, I didn't really think through how very short that actually is!

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