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Published: 2015-08-27 13:32:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 1518; Favourites: 44; Downloads: 0
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..."Do you take sugar?" and"Do you take milk?"
She'd got a new gown onβ
A smart one of silk ...
From 'The Tea Party' by Kate Greenaway
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Watercolor, graphite pencil, white marker, blue pencil - on rough paper
Critique is welcome!
Commissions are open!
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Comments: 38
The colours and designs are sweet but also somehow classy.Β
For critique I would say the teddy's pose could have been more interactive, such as having an arm slightly raised, currently he looks more like a prop than a support character.Β
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i lie how you did it all in a circle and part of hte image is coming out of the circle 
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I find it interesting and amiable, that despite her sweet clothes and surrounding she doesn't seem to be a plain boring good girl, but she promises some element of surprise. As for critique, the tininess of the objects in the bg, and the relatively big surface of the wall makes it look as if she is enclosed, and is in a not so perfect/pleasant place. One bigger picture, or a warmer colour for the wall would make the scene more welcoming and loving, but this is just a question of what feeling you were going for.
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Thank you for your critique!
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So cute. Love her hair;Β reminds me of something you might do as a young girl. Nice!
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I love the circle that it is painted within, it gives it a really good composition and highlights the dress as especially important for overlapping it.
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that's a lovelyΒ drawing I really like all the pink
awesome
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This is a good composition. First, Great work on the dress. I love the value scale in it as well as in the background. This style of coloring has a very loose feel. That's not a bad thing, it's a compliment. The wash-like color technique gives this a nice, cozy feel. Great work!
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This is really nice 
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Thank you very much for the advice!! ^_^
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Grand soft detail of the lines of mention abloom of notice bliss as this, I must say. Applause sighted founded forth, yes, well done.
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omg that is so cute x3 I love the plushie and you did an awesome work with the soft colores and watercolors ;3 nice shading too <3
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Adorable! Neat coloring too, I like it. <3
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Adorable work, it's also very pretty. I really love the soft colors you used! 
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