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Published: 2006-11-01 22:29:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 1749; Favourites: 56; Downloads: 7
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Before I go ANY further on this, I want crits.Related content
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Oh, I'm loving where this is going. Great pose and feeling. Can't wait to see the final version.
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I don't know if anyone's commented on this, but Inu-Yasha's legs look a little strange. Maybe they should be more to the right since it looks like his body crooked? I'm not sure, my comp has a strange coloring
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Hey, this was the sketch you did a while ago, ne? Her skirt looks a little crinkly there, but you've done a really nice job!
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it's awsome! I would like a back round on it... if you wanted I know it's uber hard just to coloer never mind making up and coloring the backround...
as for flaming yean kagomes hand is a bit off... then again I should talk 
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I'm annoyed by her right shoulder (or left from her own perspective). I love Inuyasha's wavy hair.
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This looks great so far. It is such a sweet and romantic pose! I think their clothing is very well done. The way you drew the wrinkles in their outfits is really amazing. It is really hard to critique your work though because it is always so crazy cool. But I do agree that Kagome's sleeves are the tiniest bit puffy on her shoulders. I don't think her hand looks awkward though... it is bent like that because she is stroking his hair.
But anyway I cannot wait to see the final version. It will be great I can tell. Great job!
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inuyasha and kagome are awesome in this drawing... good work, cant wait to the shading work on this
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Hmm.
I say, touch up Kagome's left shoulder sleeve, and add a hand on Inu and you're pretty much set.
I love the expressions on both of them. Very nice. 
Love Kagome's eyes! Can't wait to see the finished product!
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Kagome's to looks a little off, and it looks a bit like the tetsusaiga is driving into the floor, but otherwise perfect. Neither one of these things are really noticable, unless you really dig for it. I'm not sure if there a big enought deal to bother with, but you said crits, so there ya go. ^_^ Nice job! I would love to see this finished.
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I love this. I think Kagome's pose is a little stiff but I'm guessing it'll look more alive once you've finished it. Her expression, she looks a little tired. Inuyasha looks absolutely perfect. I LOVE his ears!!!!
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If it werent for the fact that there wasn't any shading then I would say that Kagome looks rather stiff. But I'm sure that when you add that then the picture will come alive.
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I really love how this looks so far, the only thing that seems a little weird to me is the angle if Inuyasha's sword, other than that it looks awesome
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Inu Yashas pant, the one on the right. The bottom makes it look like there not attached. Other than that it's beautiful. Good job!
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wow.I think it look AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Great job!!
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Yeah, I do think her right arm does look a bit awkward.
But that's it though.
Great job nonetheless.
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*chokes* God, this is looking so beautiful. I love love love the way you've drawn the folds in their clothing- especially on Inuyasha's sleeve, and the fold in the hakama where his right leg is bent. I love so much the way you've drawn his haori--it looks perfect- I can practically feel gravity pulling at it. Kagome's outfit looks great too, and I think it would be even more perfect if you made the fold between her shoulder and elbow a little more subtle (maybe with shading, or coloring the lineart 
I LOVE how his ears are drawn, and how they're backed a little. It just adds to his relaxed pose and I think it's an awesome detail. His face is BEAUTIFUL. His hair is too. Depending on what texture you want to convey with it, though, I think that little lock that hangs down by his face may or may not fall down over his shoulder a bit more. I feel weird trying to give your art crits...I LOVE your stuff so much, I rarely ever find anything wrong with it. And dammit, I'm really jealous of your ability to draw awesome poses. *shakes fist*
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To me, it looks as if the neckline is a bit too far over, like the shirt is open a little too wide.
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absolutely gorgeous so far.
her hand looks a bit awkward, but i'm pretty sure once the shading gets it it should look correct, but i just tried doing that with my fingers..and its very awkward for me to hold. i once again say its just because the shadows arent in and i'm not doing it correctly. ^-^;;
i think her eyes look a bit off, because she's slightly smiling, andher lower lids dont take on that slight curve, but this is probably fixed by shading because her cheeks will be defined by then.
i must say, i cant wait until this is finished!
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I think that Kagome's eyes should be a little bit more open and her skirt just a little less wrinkled. I can't wait to see the finished product!
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Agreed with the eyes comment...it just stuck out to me when I saw this...just a teensy iffy but I wasn't sure till I saw your comment.
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Oh, I'm glad that you agree with me.
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Kagome's sleeve seem a little too... Pooffy near her shoulders. Her shoulders also seem alittle to broad to me. But other then those two things it looks awesome.
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This is exactly what I was going to comment on.
I love the quality of her skirt, especially. Please, do continue ^3^
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I stole the words from you're... fingers XD
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Dude I know it.
You thief O:
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AHH I"VE BEEN STABBED!! @.@
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lol, really? I actually started out with her shoulders smaller, and then though her head looked too big, so I made them bigger/puffier. I guess I overdid it!
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Yeah. ^_^ LOL Yeah I do that sometimes too.
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