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nijunava — The Unknown Chapter 1

Published: 2011-08-15 14:02:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 701; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 12
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Description the first chapter to my novel I'm writing.
this is actually the second time i have uploaded but this time it is proof read X3
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Comments: 17

Sharaiza [2011-08-22 10:49:41 +0000 UTC]

Amazing is all I've to say. Really really great.
I don't read literature often here on DA but whit this was different it definetly captured my attention. *faves*

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nijunava In reply to Sharaiza [2011-08-22 13:44:58 +0000 UTC]

thankyou :3 i have the next 4 chapters up in my gallery i just havent drawn the pics for them yet so they are all together as 1 pdf file feel free to read them. i just finished the first page of the 6th chapter yesterday (i don't really write that much)

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Sharaiza In reply to nijunava [2011-08-22 16:18:48 +0000 UTC]

They are beutyful I hope it will be all right with the story.

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nijunava In reply to Sharaiza [2012-01-08 11:14:16 +0000 UTC]

since you liked it so much i thought you may wana know that i am starting to re write my story. this first chapter is redone and its now 5 times longer... i focused more on the characters and descriptiveness heres a link to the new version [link]

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theicefangs [2011-08-16 22:18:51 +0000 UTC]

just guessing but is Neira peggo? its really good btw!!!

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nijunava In reply to theicefangs [2011-08-16 23:36:38 +0000 UTC]

peggo?

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theicefangs In reply to nijunava [2011-08-16 23:38:53 +0000 UTC]

ohh sorry i ment preggo.....

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nijunava In reply to theicefangs [2011-08-17 00:28:29 +0000 UTC]

shes 12 months old.....

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theicefangs In reply to nijunava [2011-08-17 00:57:57 +0000 UTC]

i must of missed that.......

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nijunava In reply to theicefangs [2011-08-17 05:58:31 +0000 UTC]

lol its in the next chapter but she learning to be the healer so she cant be very old

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theicefangs In reply to nijunava [2011-08-17 15:17:12 +0000 UTC]

oh ok that makes sense.....

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nijunava In reply to theicefangs [2012-01-08 11:14:40 +0000 UTC]

i thought you may wana know that i am starting to re write my story. this first chapter is redone and its now 5 times longer... i focused more on the characters and descriptiveness heres a link to the new version [link]

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nijunava In reply to theicefangs [2011-08-17 15:52:22 +0000 UTC]

yea when you have a story in your head you know all this stuff cause its prety much your imagination but you forget that other people dont and that you have to write it down lol. so many times i have had the best plot for this story but when i try to put it down on paper (word?) it never comes out right lol sorry for the mass of words and random stuff right now its 2AM and im finishing half a year worth of work in one night and when im tired i type lots of random crap lol

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theicefangs In reply to nijunava [2011-08-17 21:40:58 +0000 UTC]

haha lol : )

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futuremd123 [2011-08-15 16:13:43 +0000 UTC]

its amazing!!!! i LOVE it! you did really good. I lost myself in the chapter. It is great!

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nijunava In reply to futuremd123 [2012-01-08 11:14:55 +0000 UTC]

since you liked it so much i thought you may wana know that i am starting to re write my story. this first chapter is redone and its now 5 times longer... i focused more on the characters and descriptiveness heres a link to the new version [link]

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nijunava In reply to futuremd123 [2011-08-15 23:28:14 +0000 UTC]

thanks i do have the next 4 chapters up but all as one pdf and without the pics i was gonna add check my gallery for them

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