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Published: 2010-02-05 01:44:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 477; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 0
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Yaws forYaws, The Rogues ©
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eee I love him... seems like he'd make a great journal footer or something, you know?
I'm going to be really lazy and agree with all the other compliments and critiques... but thank you so much <333
*unf unf*
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Ergghh I struggled to make a creative reply but it never worked so all I can say is...
glad you enjoyed. <3
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Oh goodness, his face.
I lawl'd.
Love love the colors and shading on this. I don't know why, but it makes him look so lively the way you did them. Like he's going to pop out of the page!
As far as crits, I also agree with ~Pyramid-Hound in that the paw he's resting on his cheek isn't positioned quite right. It should be facing the opposite way, where his paw pads are not shown. Other than that, the body seems a tad long. But maybe its just that the hind legs look a bit turned awkwardly. The knees look like they are facing the wrong way. Hard to explain. Would you like a redline, maybe?
And pah! The posing is lovely. I love how he looks so lazy and like "God, leave me alone."
I love love his facial structure the most, and how his snout sort of droops. Along with his one ear.
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Thank you first of all for all the nice compliments. xD
Now I'm going to go backwards lol. Yeah, I had some serious issues with the legs and the paw (I tried re-working it like, 10 times) buut the body is long because it's a maned wolf so I tried to make sure that was clear by making his legs and body really long.
But, yes, a redline would be very much appreciated.
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Ohhh I never knew he was a maned wolf.
I learn something new every day. :D
Ok, here's two different ones:
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I'd suggest the first if you want to go with realistic anatomy, but the second if you want to go with something more cartoony. C:
The general idea is that the knee and the lower leg should typically point in the same direction.
Just an idea, of course. xD
Hope it makes sense.
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Lol nice, I've been showing off my retard face lately.
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Aaww haha this is too cute! 
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Looks awesome as usual! Here's some critique:
Firstly, I love the pose. :3 However, it seems as if he's saying, "I can't hear you (or something like that)" because of the paw he's resting his head on. I suggest to...how do I explain this...to flip the paw over on the back and do the pose like that (since canine paws can't bend that far if they're showing the paw).
Oh god...I know that you probably won't get what I'm saying, but hope it helped?
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XD Yeah, I'm horrible at explaining this so hopefully this is what I meant: the paw looks a little off (the one that he's resting his head on). Canine paws usually don't bend that way (if they do they'll be broken). I would suggest to put the elbow of him out more, so that it'll look like as if his paw isn't broken and that it's plausible for a Yaws' paw to bend that way.
Hopefully this explanation helped?
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Well, I didn't mean to make it look like he was saying that (this is why I suck at poses XD), but I'm sure I'll figure out what you were trying to say lol. XD
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XD Yeah, I'm horrible at explaining this so hopefully this is what I meant: the paw looks a little off (the one that he's resting his head on). Canine paws usually don't bend that way (if they do they'll be broken). I would suggest to put the elbow of him out more, so that it'll look like as if his paw isn't broken and that it's plausible for a Yaws' paw to bend that way.
Hopefully this explanation helped?
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it did don't worry lol xD
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XP there's your Yaws.
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Look I posted somethin' cousin Zray. D:
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Someone looks grumpy!
This is awesome, and cute X3
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LOL awesome , I love the expression XDDD
Kinda looks like me in the morning 
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Thanks, I'm glad the expression made up for the lack of a creative pose.
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Your very welcome, and no worries, I have a difficult time with poses myself :C!
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