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Published: 2013-02-18 16:08:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 1297; Favourites: 53; Downloads: 0
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I fell in love with the colors and structures on a rusty metal garbage container
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Dear Katy, thank you so much for your lovely and incredibly kind words
I'm so glad to hear what exactly you like about it, I will take that with me in my following works 
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This is the kind of work I like a lot. The mix of colors is well balanced. The white blue zone constrasts very well with the orange and red tones.
I would have prefered more constrast and more sharpness but I'm convinced that your original picture is just perfect on these aspects. dA gives a rendering softer than the real work, and the greenish background is quite not helpful.
I'm not able to explain why, but I would suggest you the try the following modification :
- rotate the image 90 degre anti clock. The result could be stronger. The line has a bigger presence.
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I like it better as it is too. However, a fair critique!
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Thank you so much for your critique FantOme! I tried the rotating, but I just like it best this way around, sorry 
Again thank you so much for taking the time to critique my piece! I'm glad you like it!
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No reason to be sorry
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i agree with the rotation! altho i think clockwise would be better,then your eyes would see it almost as a book from left to right. just my opinion tho
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With a rotation 90 degrees anti-clockwise I think we will have a surprise
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Very lovely piece. The balance of color, with the white portion being on the top right hand corner, gives the eye a place to start and work it's way around. The contrast is balanced well to emphasize the texture of the peeling on the wall.
The line on the bottom is nice and straight. It looks good where you have cropped it in the frame. Good use of the rule of thirds, something that is often ignored in abstract photography.
Only criticism is I wish it was a bit brighter. Pop exposure and saturation, then use levels to bring back any contrast lost. That's just a personal preference. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/sā¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="
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Dear Anna,
Thank you so much for your lovely critique 
I'm so glad to hear, that you like this piece!
I have the feeling that when I submit something to DA, the picture always loses a bit of britghness. So I can understand that point 
Again, thank you so much
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Great colors. The texture give this piece a nice movement
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Great mix of color, light and shapes, good eye to see this in the first place. Really nice shot.
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this will be featured in my next journal
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That's an honour! Thank you!
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Kinda looks like a happy wolf or fox with a passenger clinging for dear life to his big, bushy tail as he leaps off a prominence. Amazing, the things the imagination shows us in the random patterns of burned, peeling and flaking paint on a dumpster that looks to have hosted a small fire.
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This looks so cool, from a distance it looks like a deer.
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Sorry 1st comment was for [link]
And this one was a pleasure
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Both works are absolutely stunning if i had money i would love to have both on my walls.
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Unfortunately I cannot get to the other work you are talking about. You mean a work of Naikki
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Hmmmm never thought of that ... will do that thanks
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She is quite new to me actually
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Fantastic art work
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AH and i think you had maybe something to do with the request for my Escape from a Mad,Mad world ,if so thank you.
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if it was for Beautiful Blur, then I have something to do with it, yes
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wonderful colour and Texture
the colors go very well and it has a slight touch of rusty metal
....looks like a deer or a Horse
Thanks so much
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Thank y o u so much !!! Still I'm not 100% sure, where exactly people see the horse. I have a assumption though
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is my pleasure.
So when I turn on my imagination, I see more of a deer, LOL. But I like this kind of work very much.
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BEAUTIFUL.....looks like a horse and a knight....
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