Zerima0 [2011-04-03 22:52:49 +0000 UTC]
I love it. The only thing I'd suggest is lightening the shadows slightly between the arm and the guy's back or some other way to make the two distinctive. At the moment, it kinda looks like the guy's arm is just random extruding from his jacket
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NewRandombell In reply to Zerima0 [2011-04-04 05:15:44 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the critique! This poster is one of those that I had better intentions for in my head but just couldn't find a good way to execute it. Having had enough of a break from it, I might go back and see if I can "fix" it and I'll definitely keep in mind your suggestion.
Thanks again!
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Zerima0 In reply to NewRandombell [2011-04-06 23:09:38 +0000 UTC]
I know what you mean; it looks great, but something just looks unfinished, you know? Really, just a little fine tuning on the lighting is all I can think of that it needs. Looking at it again, I think an alternative would be to have more contrast between the jacket and the background. The white fade just seems kind of messy.
One of the main points of the Godfather is how clean and smooth they run their business. The old film affect is perfect, but beneath it, things just need to stick out more.
I don't mean to be ripping it apart like I am; I know you did this a while ago and I know your recent stuff is a lot better, but this one just caught my eye, you know?
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