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nene-chan — Fragments of Temptation

Published: 2002-11-14 04:10:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 517; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 137
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Description Dogs bark in the distance
A nearby street lamp highlights
the cracks in the dashboard.
smooth as silk voices
singing of love gone wrong
barely audible
on the radio.
the scent of his cologne
surrounding me.
An almost perfect situation
except
he does not belong to me.
In a few hours
I'll never see him again.
Nothing can be seen
through the fogged up windows.
The pressure of his hand
on the back of my neck
or the taste of my lip gloss
on his lips
will be known by no one.
But us.
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Comments: 9

angelfacek [2004-11-07 03:20:15 +0000 UTC]

so sad,
so irresistably alluring..
wow.

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angelfacek [2004-11-07 03:12:14 +0000 UTC]

sad .. but seductive !!
perfect ..

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identitystatik [2004-04-28 12:29:53 +0000 UTC]

I like it, I think I would have to agree with taht comment made by *myra911* about it being almost seductive.

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nene-chan In reply to identitystatik [2004-05-05 17:33:24 +0000 UTC]

Well, thank you.

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myra911 [2002-12-19 16:10:54 +0000 UTC]

Its beautiful, almost sad, yet at the same time almost seductive. Well written!

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moonlight-sonata [2002-12-13 14:00:13 +0000 UTC]

...reminds me of a weird post-modern meeting at night/parting at morning scenario...

interesting

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elphabastevens [2002-12-09 16:44:30 +0000 UTC]

Excellent. Fragments, indeed, because the memory chooses certain items and discards the rest as background noise to the plot of our decisions. Very, very well done.

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dymentia [2002-11-15 16:22:43 +0000 UTC]

as amazingly powerful it is, the sadness of the forbidden nature of it overwhelms me as I reread this. You did a wonderful job.

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chesterfield [2002-11-14 15:21:32 +0000 UTC]

you just won yourself a +fav with that one, sweetheart

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