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Published: 2011-01-21 16:18:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 2586; Favourites: 63; Downloads: 22
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EDIT: I corrected some text
big thanks to UnrelatedTalents
prologue : [link]
pg 2 [link]
yeaaahhh 1-st page
Heban's reference [link]
i can't good draw lions so i use some photo reference
credits to
TheLionShare
WhiteLion4894
i cant find reference of 4th panel , so if you gt it please call me i ill add credits
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about character
lion - called Heban ,
lioness who scream at him is his wife , her name is Litah
it is not perfect page but it is my first and i think it isn't bad look
comments please and lets join to ofc if you want
do not use, edit alter or re-distribute without my written permission!!!
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Comments: 32
I'm loving this comic! I'm really glad to see that there are some animal comics here that aren't just about wolves. The plot (or what I think it is so far) is really good, too; keep it up~!
I noticed that Heban's reply/retort in the bottom left (where he's yelling back at Litah) doesn't make a lot of sense. Maybe this would work better?
Maybe if you stopped hunting warthogs, my ass would be better for you!
Not sure if this anything big, but I figured I would point it out~
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Haha niezłe. Zapowiada się świetnie ^^ Cudnie rysujesz lwy
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fajnie wygląda C=
a mogła byś przetłumaczyć na polski ?
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w przyszlym tygodniu dodam wersje polska
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ok C=
łap zapro do grupy jak będzie wersja pl to dodaj
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Hah. Pięknie Ci lwy wychodzą. Biję pokłony.
Masz świetny styl. Genialny po prostu.
A "Why so serious?" jest świetne xD
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Jejku <3 Zapowiada się wspaniale! I jest takie inspirujące, że chyba wezmę się do roboty i zacznę działać ze swoim komiksem
Tak trzymaj!
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dziekuje , trzymam kciuki za Ciebie i twoj komiks
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Nicely drawn, however I'm seeing quite a few grammatical errors. I'm not sure if it's on purpose, though.
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can you told me which one? i'm not best with English language so it will be nice that you say me
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Panel 2: "Heban... Heban! Wake up! Someone is coming for you!"
Panel 3: "What the hell would they want from me again?"
Panel 4: "It won't matter if I stay asleep longer, just 5 minutes. My mummy always lets me sleep 5 minutes longer, so what will happen if I don't get up? Hm? Nothing..." And "Heban! Move your fat ass over here!"
Panel 5: I think the only problem here is that hunt should be hunting.
I hope this helps.
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ok thanks 
if i will have any problems with grammar ,can i ask You for help?
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Really, it's not a problem. Your art is lovely and I'd be glad to help.
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thank you! thank you !thank you!
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No problem! Thank you for the watch!
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gaaaah czekam na resztę
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Taaa... zaczyna się no nie powiem... fajnie
A lwy są straszne... nie umiem rysować lwów... dobrze Ci wyszły
I oby tak dalej!
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very nice page
you style ist very cool i love them
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haha mothers XD
nice theme xD
and your lion style is just great
when will there be next page? :3
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i dont know maybe next week
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cool
but its very well drawn!
ah
by the way
should I draw armors for aluka ect?
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alright^^
but keep going on this!
its just great
you make the same damn good outline I never can draw -.- mrrr
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