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Published: 2010-10-06 06:46:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 452; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 5
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hey guys i feel kinda sheepishi was feeling completely stressed out so my mom allowed me some rest time on the computer..sdfklcjslkdfjafsld
this came out relatively fast. like under an hour?
EXAMS SUCK, BUT THEY'RE ALMOST OVER, I MIGHT BE ABLE TO STOP STUDYING NOW RRR
ITS AIDEN! im not really in pa anymore..hahaha.. but I like Aiden and Joshua so I'mma keepem [: aiden's here being a lazy asshole without a background, but what else is new?
critiques please?(: I feel like I've gotten better.
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Yes.
YES.
I CAN FINALLY USE THIS GODDAMN LITTLE FANCY CRITIQUE BOX yeahhhhhh ok
So um, I'm already writing a jillion words here lol
LETS DO DIS
I'm mostly gonna crit you on your anatomy, because...yeah |D. Your coloring here is amazing (as usual) and I REALLY LOVE THE WAY YOU...COLOR/SHADESTUFF.FF
so. anatomy. heh.
YOUR FREAKING HANDSSS they're so cool sdfkjj. yeah. I suck at hands lol. SO YEAH.
The biggest issue here is your feet;; brr I know how frustrating learning to draw feet is, it takes forever. KEEP PRACTICING and also look at real feet to help you xD
The next thing would be keeping your shoulders and torso proportionate to each other; this is kind of a recurring problem for you when you draw guys so I'll cover it here |D. You often draw your shoulders and then draw your torso next to them instead of kinda...attached? idk, it's hard to explain, I'm really better at redlines ha. Men's shoulders are generally further away from their bodies than girl's, it's true, but if you're shoulders are gonna be wide than the torso needs to be wide as well.
NEXT THING: YOUR LEGS
actually I'm sure /your/ legs are very nice. And Aiden's are pretty well done too. Like I said earlier, work on the feet more, they can really help the perspective in a drawing. I'll have to show you sometime how I do my feet :U <3.
The one thing I'd change about his legs is how far his left (right? idk it's on the right BUT IT'S HIS LEFT LEG SO) leg is crammed up into his crotch.
That sounds really bad.
I'D JUST...SCOOT HIS FOOT FORWARD A BIT and a little to the right. Even though your knees CAN take that much strain (or at least mine can, heh) it's extremely uncomfortable of a position to hold, and Aiden is kinda supposed to look relaxed in this picture. BUT I LIKE THE SPLAY LEGGED SITTING ON YOUR BUTT POSE HE HAS LOL
um
SO BEYOND THAT your torso is actually pretty well drawn (instead of being......ugly or fat) and you did your arms really well here 8D. I hate drawing arms ff.
I really need to just write some hugeass tutorial explaining anatomy so you poor guys don't have to listen to my ramblings oh my;; <3
ITS SO GREAT TO SEE YOU ONLINE SKDFLDJFK ily so much and...ARTWORK OH MY
also how in the heck do you manage something like this in a freaking hour
I am amazed
<3
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GAAH
this is amaz-amazing
I seriously..gaaah OTLOTLOTL
sdkfjlskdjcljksdlfjsldf i dont even deserve this critique
oh god dsf OK THE FEET.. IMMA FIX THAT
they do look kinda blobby and ...shapeless. so i'll work on emphasizing the toes, thank you [: I also heard that they're kinda small, so HERE I GO
/googles 'feet'
I completely understand what you mean about my torsos/shoulders. yeah, I've been trying to solve that but they still look somewhat disconnected, hahaha OTL but it's nice to know that this time my arms arent too fat or something (yay!). it feels like I've come a long way to hear such compliments from you 8u8 <33
I was actually pretty worried on whether the legs were too short, but it was the pose that made them look like that, I suppose. ah I see about the crotch thing, hahaha!! thanks so much!
dfkjdFFF IF YOU MADE A TUTORIAL I WOULD LIKE WORSHIP IT
ily so much. thanks so so
so so so much for your crit! ;;;u;; <333
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OF COURSE YOU DESERVE IT I never write random...shit like this on everyone else's art 8D <3
Yeah they're just kinda shapeless, but the biggest problem is how short they are.
HEY I KNOW I CAN WRITE A TUT ON DRAWING FEET BD /tackled
Heck you're definitely getting better SO JUST KEEP PRACTICING AND YOUR ART WILL EVOLVE
No they're really pretty proportionate and everything <3. If you're worried about the length of your legs just measure where the bones would start/end and see if it's about the same or a little longer than the length of your body.
ALSO YOUR FEET ARE AS LONG AS YOUR FOREARM its really cool try it 8DDDD
sklaklfakf ily too <3
BE ONLINE MORE and.......keep drawing :U <3
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YAY NOW I CAN WRITE CRITS <3
Well, first off, your humans are LOVE, you've improved on them so much <3, I feel so proud of you e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h… " width="15" height="13" alt="
Ok, crit time:
The feet/foot however it's the plural are too small, I mean, the feet is the same length as your forearm uhm, they are also to broad and the thumbs are the same size as the rest of the toes...they are usually bigger and broad...er
The left...I believe shoulder(the one which isn't holding the book) looks a bit awkard, as if it was dislocated or something I'll try to redline it 'kk?<3
AS I'VE TOLD YOU A GAZILLION TIMES I LOVE they way you color, but I can see a few blanc spaces c:, I'd reccommend using the selection tool on SAI, you can idk, use a small diameter so that you can work easier, they are small spaces so yeah Uu
The mouth should be slightly placed to the left, like, it's ending right on the right cheek it looks weird orz, I'd also place it a bit higher idk how to explain that sorryyyy
Why a 3 stars impact?Well, to me it isn't something really /impacting/, he's just relaxing and all that, nothing action-y or important is happening.
Overall, these are just small details, I really like the piece and that tail is just so fluffy ;;, I want to hug it pls c:
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!!!!
I can't even explain how happy I was to receive this crit. I clicked on the messages and then I saw "Watched Critique: Chizah" and that it was for me and SKDLJFLCJKSDF! It's like I can now go back and sigh, "Chiz critiqued me!! life's back to normal!!" TTuTT <3
sorry, I know how weird that sounds, lmao. otl/// but thank you soso much for the crit.
I'm really bad with the shoulders, and I have the feeling that he's still too skinny, so your tips help loads. As for the foot thing, I never noticed! I'll have to make them bigger from now on, haha XD
I thought I could get away with not coloring the edges of him and being messy, but it seems I was apprehended XD you're gonna make an excellent criminologist XDD! I agree the mouth looks sorta weird and depleted looking. I'll have to fix that in my next pictures. I'm still getting in the hang of drawing faces x]
dslfjff thank you chizz <333 that means a lot to me!
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Awww ;;, you were happy to receive it?I was worried about if I had been to harsh or something ORZ.
Yeah they are x'D, I mean, I didn't really believe it but this person --> comes to my house every a certain time(Uu yeah, he's my sister boyfriend) and tends to crit my pics and everything, and he told me so. He even gave a demostration about it..OTZ.
Faces can be hard to draw yesss ;;, I can't draw a side view of them for my life Uu, it's curious I can draw side views for wolves but not a 3/4 frontal view and I can with humans LOL OTZ)
No problem ;; <33
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no way, I'm totally enamored of all your critiques chiz ;;; <333
XD me too! I suck at human profiles (i'm working on it at the moment, in fact) but side view is so easy for canine, lol.
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HEY, LOOK.
KIRI ARTS.
Really? OMG WHERE.
RIGHT THERE.
SERIOUSLY.
:'D
Hnng you need to stop depriving everyone of your wonderful art, yo. I: <3
Have I mentioned this is epic?
No?
Well.
THIS IS EPIC. fffzzt. <3
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KIRI YOU LIVE adskjs I miss seeing your art here! gah so lovely ;__;
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lsdfj waah Jacki, thank you so much ;;;u;; <33
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COME BACK TO THE US LIKE NOW FFFFFFFFFFFF-
WE'LE THOW YOU A FESTA AND NO POTATO CHIP DEER WILL COME.
ONLY THE HO,O GARAFFIS
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MAGGIE YOU HAVE ATROCIOUS SPELLING!!!
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;A;
QAQ
I missed your drawings SO MUCH aksjgdals
and I think you did got better. Especially in the hair and eyesss <333
Also, this is really good for a quick draw. I would've done something really messy with such little time. :I
and go kick that exam in the assss.
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FSDLJSL
Dummy~~ TT0TT sdlkj
thanks so much, you are amazing. ;;u;; <333/glomfpu you
OK WILL DO! <3
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AAAAPRIL
STOP IMPROVING SO FASTTTT
I've missed you fff <33
and hey your shading style is the sex, man
/the sex/
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I SHOULD BE THE ONE SAYING THAT TO YOU. TOTAL STYLE CHANGE = ME LIKE??
i missed you.sdkfjclj ILY
also, thanks so much ;u;
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This is so pretty. <3
sdfkjldc
thanks so much gere ;;;u;; <333
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I think you've improved a lot.
this one's really good. c:
you're style's awesometastic.
&& I know what you mean about pa, I'm not really active in the group anymore but I'ma keep Hazel && my other characters because I luff em so much. ;u;
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waah, thanks so much!! 8uu8 <333
yeah. I can never let go of my characters for some reason or another, lol. ): makes me sad.
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pssh no problem. c:
&& yeah.
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8'D
You're alive! Hope studying is going well!
That is an epic green i-pod, too. 
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/ALIVE
thanks sil, your support means a lot to me ;;u;; <3
and i know right? XD
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holydoucheface LOOK at that improvement!!
OH. MY. GOD. KIRI HOW I'VE MISSED YOU.
i've been sooooo down lately and this was like a huge breath of fresh air. YOU COMING ONLINE FOR A BIT WAS ACTUALLY UGH DO YOU EVEN KNOW??
but okay um. picture.
wowza that shading is delicious ahh. ;v; and his FACE! and HAIR! and that FLUFFYASFKJDJKDSA TAIL~~ <33
maahhh~~!! i just love the entire thing! ;v;
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FDSFFFDSFFFF ATTIII. hnggg I missed you so much.
dflksdjs so funny, because I felt totally better after stalking your gallery! we complement each other lmao!! <3
thank you so much aaa ;;u;; your comments really just make me feel a whole lot brighter. maah thankyouthankyou~ ;;u;; <333
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HDFASDJKHSKDF HI KIRI YOU CAME BACK from the dead
AHEM AS I WAS SAYING, oh gooosh SHADING,
I've always loved your shading ffffff
I think he's looking pretty nice, the pose flows as well; I can't really critique that much right now though since it's already midnight around here and I need to finish some history homework...OH MY PROCRASTINATION
anyways I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE MORE FROM YOUUUUU
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WADOS WADOS WADOS
sflkjcs thanks so much ;;u;; <33
i'm really glad the pose works out. it was so awkward when I sketched it OTL
LOL I have history homework too! except it was due yesterday.. oops.
FF THANKS <33
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I'M SO GLAD YOU ... UPLOADED ... |8 <33
ffff ... I am very jealous of your humans. AND YOUR EYE STYLE I've always loved it so much and seeing it all better'd is like a piece of christmas
yes
I'M SO SORRY ABOUT EXAMS ;; <33
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THANK YOU SO MUCH 8u8 <333
that makes me happy
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