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thesage2600 [2012-08-15 19:08:09 +0000 UTC]
Continuation of The Rose
Act 2, Scene 1:
Sakura searched through the village, trying to find Naruto. She had to explain to him what happened with Sasuke; she didn't want him to think what she was sure he was thinking.
Unknown person: "Sakura-san?"
Sakura skid to a stop to see Hinata Hyuuga in front of her, looking confused.
Hinata: "Sakura-san, is something the matter?"
Sakura (tired): "Oh...It's you, Hinata. Have you seen Naruto anywhere?"
Hinata (face sad, whispers): "Not since this morning."
Sakura: "Hinata, are you alright?"
Hinata: "Y-Yeah, just a little down..."
Sakura: "What happened? You aren't having problems with Hiashi-san again, are you?"
Hinata (shake her head): "N-No, Father and I have been really close lately."
Sakura: "Then does it have to do with Naruto."
Hinata (looks away embarrassed): "He...told me he didn't like me like I like him."
Sakura (feels awkward): "O-Oh?"
Hinata (nods her head): "I...I think he's in love with someone else."
Sakura: "W-Who?"
Hinata (stares at her resolutely): "You, Sakura-san. It's always been you."
Sakura: "I...Would you be mad if I felt the same way? (looks down in shame) You noticed him first. You loved him first. I...wasn't very nice to him like you were. I always end up hurting him, do I really have the right to be with him?"
Hinata (grabs Sakura's face and forces her to at her in the eyes): "Sakura-san, you were a child. You did what you were taught. You say I noticed him first? That I loved him first? But, you know what, who cares? W-What about who Naruto-kun noticed first? What about his feelings? Sakura-san, I am jealous of you, and not just because Naruto-kun loves you. You are such a wonderful person, far more than you give yourself credit for."
Sakura: "But, so are you! You are a wonderful girl, Hinata! You are so sweet and kind and treat everyone so nicely! You are special!"
Hinata (wipes a few tears away): "But, I'm not the type Naruto-kun fell in love with. I-I can't be myself around him. I...would be happier as his friend, I see that now. I just want to be noticed by him, and I want him to be happy. Sakura-san, you can make him happy. (takes a deep breath) Sakura Haruno, I entrust my beloved to you so long as you make him happy."
Sakura (stares in shock): "I...I...Wow, Hinata's that's...I don't even know what to say."
Hinata: "Say you will. Say you will make him happy."
Sakura: "I...I promise. (closes eyes as a few tears fall out and does a thumb's up) It's a promise of a lifetime."
Hinata (bows): "Thank you so much, Sakura-san."
Sakura: "You're welcome. (she sighs) But, now I need to go find him and I don't know where he is."
Hinata: "I-Is Naruto-kun upset?"
Sakura: "Probably. He saw me with Sasuke-kun and...Well, it's just one big misunderstanding."
Hinata (nods): "I won't ask, but Naruto-kun is probably in the park since it's so dark. It's where he always good."
Sakura (chuckles softly): "And, you know that how?"
Hinata (blushes a deep shade of red): "A-Ah, does it matter?"
Sakura (still chuckling): "I guess not. Thanks, Hinata."
Sakura runs off towards the park, leaving Hinata alone. In the dim light of one of the street lamps, Sakura sees Naruto walking around slowly. He looked so dejected and Sakura felt tears in her eyes. When their eyes connected, his widened and he began to walk off, Sakura ran after him and grabbed on the back of his shirt, crying softly. Naruto paused, confused.
Sakura (crying, thinks): 'I'm sorry, Naruto. It wasn't what you thought.'
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Jenkyriel In reply to thesage2600 [2013-11-08 19:00:45 +0000 UTC]
i think, that part, when hinata talk to sakura, about naruto, i feel, that gonna be happen in Naruto Shippuden Series, hahha..
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spider767 In reply to clayuzumaki [2012-08-08 05:24:06 +0000 UTC]
i believe you are right, Naruto was going to meet Sakura to be on a date but Sasuke came and tries to steal Sakura but Sakura told Sasuke that she doesn't love him anymore. Naruto however saw Sasuke trying to hug and kiss Sakura and assume Sakura still loves Sasuke and decides to leave , leaving Sakura heartbroken
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clayuzumaki In reply to clayuzumaki [2012-08-08 02:12:31 +0000 UTC]
I mean she's crying while shes running after him.
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Terunpedo [2012-08-07 15:09:59 +0000 UTC]
T^T sad!!! And Perfect
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DeadCobra [2012-08-07 11:50:14 +0000 UTC]
Great
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Riddif999 [2012-08-07 11:17:14 +0000 UTC]
Short story:
Naruto just being down, because he cannot fulfill his promise to Sakura to bring Sasuke back. he really did not in a good mood for a week..
and one day Sakura can't stand this, when she saw her teammate like that, so she decide to take Naruto a walk, or it can be called a weak date...
then when they talking each other, Sakura just slip her tongue, saying Sasuke name, Sakura just want to comfort Naruto and make him feel better, but...
the event take the opposite, Naruto yelled to Sakura and ran away.. Sakura make her biggest mistake, talking about that Snake-bitch.. so she chase him... with tears
And Naruto stop and say, "Please Sakura-chan, don't ever ever say that word again, i cannot fulfill my promise, my lifetime promise to you, and just bring Sasuke deepen in darkness.." and Sakura put her arm on his back and sobbing "i'm sorry.... i'm sorry Na.. Naruto... I... I didn't mean it"...
yeah and so on the story... sorry my bad grammar
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Tori5 [2012-08-07 06:28:19 +0000 UTC]
Oh, come on, admit it Sakura. You want to be with Sasuke. So what? Everyone is free to chase after whoever s/he wants.
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naturoo In reply to Tori5 [2012-08-09 02:08:33 +0000 UTC]
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Tori5 In reply to naturoo [2012-08-09 06:34:16 +0000 UTC]
Not sure what the picture means, sorry.
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Naruto-kun487 In reply to Tori5 [2017-02-20 23:01:24 +0000 UTC]
It mean that "This is NaruSaku" and kicks NH and SS fans into the deep black hole.
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Naruto-kun487 In reply to Tori5 [2017-02-21 18:48:10 +0000 UTC]
Of course it is ^^
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DAVE37 [2012-08-07 03:08:41 +0000 UTC]
Hey! I just thought of an idea, what to hear it?
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naturoo In reply to DAVE37 [2012-08-08 00:06:23 +0000 UTC]
hey just blow it up dude.. i want hear that !
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DAVE37 In reply to naturoo [2012-08-08 17:17:36 +0000 UTC]
what if Naruto made accedienlty made a real life clone of Sakura but this one is more open about her feelings
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LordDarkness0 [2012-08-07 03:03:52 +0000 UTC]
Sad song? It reminds me of World So Cold by Three Days Grace. Very beautiful, and depressing.
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Kudos707 [2012-08-07 02:44:50 +0000 UTC]
Ah bullshit, Sakura. Don't make it worse for Jumpsuit and poor salt in the wound.
I like that you're kind of making this an image series, getting excited to see where this goes!
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Kudos707 In reply to naturoo [2012-08-07 08:39:50 +0000 UTC]
Hmm. Well if you're not going to do more directly related art with Sakura and Naruto, I'd say move onto another pairing. I suggest either the Neji/Tenten pairing or the Temari/Shikamaru pairing. They don't get enough attention.
Or some solo Ino stuff. I'm always up for that.
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Slayer09Slayer09 [2012-08-07 01:54:13 +0000 UTC]
i can form up a couple of guesses to whats going on, but still so sad
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inukaglove [2012-08-07 01:39:36 +0000 UTC]
Nicely done. I love it. Keep up the good work.
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sbkline [2012-08-07 01:30:58 +0000 UTC]
awesome great storyline
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landra15 [2012-08-07 00:40:41 +0000 UTC]
how sad. sakura probably finally wants to accept naruto's attempts to get her to like him after sasuke left. she dosen't want to feel alone anymore.
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