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NatsuNoYuki — Nostalgic Echoes
Published: 2010-01-20 06:40:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 517; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 7
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Description Jasmine flowers bloom their sweet scent from a new (familiar) cup.
They make an excellent cup of tea (for two),
at least that's what people say but
my mind is too lost in thought (memories) to linger.
Why is it that snow petals and saccharine steam
would always (always)
fade into dark hair and bitter dreams?

It's always the same forgotten images:
the same (chocolate) eyes,
same (fragile) smile,
same (ancient) tears. Of all the things
I should remember
(shouldn't remember),
why these and how?

For once I'd like to see that person (again),
the one I can't recall but still remember
because of the fragrance of
white buds (his skin)
among green leaves (his clothes).
I want to know the name of
this scattered (only) memory,
the one who smells (smelled) like jasmine.
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Comments: 8

ihatedancing [2010-01-27 16:12:29 +0000 UTC]

Blushed *///*

Whoa this is very good poem!
i fell in love with it, it is so inspirational!!

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NatsuNoYuki In reply to ihatedancing [2010-01-28 07:10:00 +0000 UTC]

Really? ;w; thank you!

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xinferiorityCOMPLEX [2010-01-23 16:19:01 +0000 UTC]

Very nice.
Ilovedit.
<3;

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joxelyn-n7 [2010-01-22 20:28:46 +0000 UTC]

wow I fell.. I don't know, is cute

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NatsuNoYuki In reply to joxelyn-n7 [2010-01-23 05:11:25 +0000 UTC]

Thank you :3

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joxelyn-n7 In reply to NatsuNoYuki [2010-01-23 23:48:23 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome

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xblkdragonx [2010-01-22 02:48:04 +0000 UTC]

A very sad, bitter poem~ Bitter not as in hateful but bitter as in a soft, gentle ache. LOL in turn, your comment saying my fic inspired you, inspired me to write a continuation XD.

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NatsuNoYuki In reply to xblkdragonx [2010-01-22 03:15:19 +0000 UTC]

Yea 8D Inspiration all around!

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