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Published: 2012-03-15 13:32:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 218; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 5
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Time will go onIt won't stop passing by
The wind will keep blowing
And the rain keeps falling from the sky
The sun is shining
Though not for me
Not for us
The feeling the day
Has nothing to bring
That emptiness
That gaping hole in my chest
I'm just simply one hell of a mess
What difference do I make
When acting as I do
Everybody comes and goes
I always wonder what it does take
That black box
I seem to be in
That empty feeling
The pain burningΒ Β from deep within
Everybody happy
The sun shines for all
But what it doesn't reach
Is me
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Comments: 10
*Sprinkles sunshine liberally* Smile, little one!
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You're remarkably happy dear XD
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*hahahah* Teehee!
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this describes the way I started feeling since my dad died ... so very empty and alone
luckly I have recentlly started to like someone (fall in love) and it's healling feeling
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Want to talk? Gmail?
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First off , it's rather sad poem and beautifull at the same time. Strangely enough the best poems are mostly written when the writer is in a depressed state. That also reminds me of a saying "behind every cloud there is sun shine." As i said before emotions are the best motive for writing. Long story short, Very nice and deep poem that if you read it well enough. You would feel the emotions within the poem itself.
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Indeed it is. Thank you
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I hope that you don't stay too long in that depressed state
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I already said it on msn, but I like your way of putting words on paper 
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Thank you dear :3
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