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Poor Naruto... I wish I could be there to comfort you...
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Great story till now and your drawing skills is improving..
I wish I could improve my drawing skills faster. I'm improving very slowly...
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Some mistakes...
► Instead of 'I just want someone to accept me as a human being... not a demon child...' it should be 'I just want someone to accept me as a human being... not as a demon child...'
► Instead of 'Not turning away from me like I'm who standing here is nothing to them...' it should be 'Not turning away from me when I'm standing here like I'm nothing to them...'
Have a nice day!
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Thank you as always. I've seen your drawing. They're not bad.
I considerate my drawing very poor. But, let's improve together. Human can improve!
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Your welcome! I'm glad I could correct your mistakes. It'll help you improve your English, right?
Thanks for saying that my drawing aren't so bad. I appreciated.
Let's improve together! I agree!
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