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Description And you thought you weren't gonna see more of Rehema, didn't you? This is a bonus page of "Betrothed" and a contest prize for who won first place in my "Rehema Untold" contest back in June of last year. Sorry about the wait, Jess. Now that "Betrothed" is finished, I finally have time to catch up on these prizes.

HUZZAH for Nala15's first upload of 2013!

The winning pic and *Magicionary 's original script are below.
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The fire had finally died down enough for Rehema and Rejeza to venture out of the den. They took a few steps out to survey the damage and they were anything but prepared for what they saw.

"...Dad?"

There, in a heap just strides away from the den entrance, was their father. He had burns all over his body, but they could tell he died from exposure to the dense, hot air and smoke.

Rejeza turned his head away. Rehema closed his eyes. He shook his head as if trying to rid his mind of the image before him. They stood there a few silent moments more. They knew they needed to get back to the few lionesses in the den, but they couldn't seem to move.

"The drought is winning," Rejeza finally broke the silence. Rehema looked up at him. "I didn't think it was dry enough to catch fire, but. . ." his voice trailed off. He remembered suggesting to their father about moving the pride. He remembered wanting to find greener lands. He remembered giving up his share of food so Rehema could eat.

"Rehema, I want you to leave this place. Go find land, a mate. Start a family! I can't let you stay here any longer."

"Come with me!" Rehema replied, realizing what his brother was asking of him. "We can gather the lionesses and be on our way and. . ."

"No," Rejeza said, cutting him off mid-sentence. "Father wouldn't want me to abandon our land."

"Father wouldn't want you to kill yourself over this land either," Rehema countered.

"It's too late for me," Rejeza said, tears finally springing to his eyes. "For the lionesses too. We made sure you had plenty to eat, because you are the youngest. We wanted you to have a good future... we thought things would get better."

"Then I'm staying! I can't leave you to die! What would mother and father think if they were still here? I can take care of you all!" Rehema was desperate to stay with his family. "You have taught me to hunt and fight, I can do it!"

"Rehema, I didn't want to have to do this. But, as the new king, I sentence you to exile."

"WHAT? Exile for what?"

Rejeza thought for a moment. "For. . . stealing more than your share of food." Rejeza paused and held up a paw to silence the outraged young lion before him. "I know we gave it up willingly. But I've gotta have a reason." The tears were beginning to flow again. "I can't let you die like Dad. And Mom. I - I can't. You have a chance of making it out there! I can't just let you stay in this wasteland."

Rehema nodded, knowing his brother was right.

"Carry on our family, Rehema. It's too late for us, but you can make us great again," the older lion continued. Rehema began walking the ash-covered trail out of his once-jungle home. "And Rehema," he called after his brother. "Please, for your own sake, don't ever come back."

Rehema nodded and walked on again. He took one final look back at his brother, the king. Too late. he repeated in his mind. He knew this was the last time he'd ever see his family. And he cried.

Art © *Nala15 . Rehema's design © *Nala15 ; Rejeza's design, "Exiled..." story, and original image © *Magicionary and used with permission.
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5677ibndsh [2021-01-17 14:21:49 +0000 UTC]

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Nala15 In reply to 5677ibndsh [2021-01-21 00:37:55 +0000 UTC]

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5677ibndsh In reply to Nala15 [2021-01-21 01:23:25 +0000 UTC]

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Nala15 In reply to 5677ibndsh [2021-01-21 01:23:43 +0000 UTC]

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5677ibndsh In reply to Nala15 [2021-01-21 01:37:52 +0000 UTC]

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Nala15 In reply to 5677ibndsh [2021-01-21 01:53:44 +0000 UTC]

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5677ibndsh In reply to Nala15 [2021-01-21 02:53:51 +0000 UTC]

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Nala15 In reply to 5677ibndsh [2021-01-21 03:03:30 +0000 UTC]

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5677ibndsh In reply to Nala15 [2021-01-21 03:27:34 +0000 UTC]

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5677ibndsh In reply to Nala15 [2021-01-21 01:19:18 +0000 UTC]

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DinosaurQueen1774 [2020-12-14 00:27:35 +0000 UTC]

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Nala15 In reply to DinosaurQueen1774 [2020-12-14 00:47:58 +0000 UTC]

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DinosaurQueen1774 In reply to Nala15 [2020-12-14 12:42:05 +0000 UTC]

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Nala15 In reply to DinosaurQueen1774 [2020-12-15 01:25:36 +0000 UTC]

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Volkarr [2017-10-01 19:16:17 +0000 UTC]

about 9th panel...

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lol

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tomas144 [2015-11-01 10:23:59 +0000 UTC]

oh, I didn't know about this page ... poor Rehema, he doesn't belong anywhere :/

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Nala15 In reply to tomas144 [2015-11-03 18:42:21 +0000 UTC]

He's an outcast everywhere he goes.

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Euralore [2015-04-18 18:23:56 +0000 UTC]

No wonder he took it so hard when Ahadi said that.

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Nala15 In reply to Euralore [2015-08-10 04:32:47 +0000 UTC]

Yep. Echoes from the past.

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thereturnofkopa [2013-01-22 23:11:09 +0000 UTC]

-sobbing- REHEEEEEEEMAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!

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Nala15 In reply to thereturnofkopa [2013-01-22 23:20:21 +0000 UTC]

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thereturnofkopa In reply to Nala15 [2013-01-22 23:55:59 +0000 UTC]

you should do a comic of rehema, how he came to be.

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Nala15 In reply to thereturnofkopa [2013-01-23 00:17:44 +0000 UTC]

I've heard that one before. I might... I just think it's more fun to let you guys speculate, though.

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thereturnofkopa In reply to Nala15 [2013-01-23 00:47:48 +0000 UTC]

ohhhh i see how it is. make us writhe in agony as we wait for it. XP lol just kidding.

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Nala15 In reply to thereturnofkopa [2013-01-23 00:48:10 +0000 UTC]

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soogdier9898 [2013-01-20 02:19:37 +0000 UTC]

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Nara-Wolf [2013-01-12 18:41:22 +0000 UTC]

I'm going to a corner to cry my eyes out now.

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Nala15 In reply to Nara-Wolf [2013-01-12 18:45:13 +0000 UTC]

Awww...

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Chronological-Rising [2013-01-12 01:30:59 +0000 UTC]

I am listening to happy music while reading this so I have no emotions to it ;3;

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Nala15 In reply to Chronological-Rising [2013-01-12 01:53:24 +0000 UTC]

A good strategy.

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Chronological-Rising In reply to Nala15 [2013-01-12 02:10:43 +0000 UTC]

It's all music from switzerland xD

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Nala15 In reply to Chronological-Rising [2013-01-12 18:09:42 +0000 UTC]

Polka?

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Chronological-Rising In reply to Nala15 [2013-01-13 02:25:18 +0000 UTC]

No... it's the same as music from the us c:

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Nala15 In reply to Chronological-Rising [2013-01-13 02:38:52 +0000 UTC]

Oh, okay.

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Chronological-Rising In reply to Nala15 [2013-01-15 23:19:24 +0000 UTC]

Hehe

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JessamineDiane [2013-01-10 22:32:02 +0000 UTC]

Wow this is really good and really adds a lot to the story of Rehema and the over-all story of Betrothed. Well done Magicionary! This is so sad though.

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Nala15 In reply to JessamineDiane [2013-01-11 02:28:03 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! Yes! Go Magicionary!

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werewolf-legend [2013-01-10 03:49:46 +0000 UTC]

NNNOOOOO!!! Poor Rehema...

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Nala15 In reply to werewolf-legend [2013-01-10 03:50:35 +0000 UTC]

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kopaisfluffy [2013-01-09 18:48:22 +0000 UTC]

Awww!!! Rejema do it for his good, and for his future


Maked me cried

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Nala15 In reply to kopaisfluffy [2013-01-09 19:41:38 +0000 UTC]

Aww...

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kopaisfluffy In reply to Nala15 [2013-01-11 14:40:56 +0000 UTC]

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Renatu500 [2013-01-08 17:24:23 +0000 UTC]

so... he failed?

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Nala15 In reply to Renatu500 [2013-01-09 03:42:11 +0000 UTC]

Not exactly...

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Renatu500 In reply to Nala15 [2013-01-09 12:22:38 +0000 UTC]

yeah scar was a king for sometime.

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Nala15 In reply to Renatu500 [2013-01-09 19:47:18 +0000 UTC]

Exactly! Not a very good one, but he still moved up in society. He was born into the royal family afterall.

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Renatu500 In reply to Nala15 [2013-01-09 20:31:41 +0000 UTC]

i tought with "make the family great again" he means With acts not in Ranks, Like mufasa...

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Nala15 In reply to Renatu500 [2013-01-09 20:54:31 +0000 UTC]

Well, yes. But I think he meant it in all senses of the word.

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Renatu500 In reply to Nala15 [2013-01-09 21:30:40 +0000 UTC]

So... he Did it but failed too Right?

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Nala15 In reply to Renatu500 [2013-01-09 22:04:32 +0000 UTC]

Kinda... I guess...

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