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hangtenyouknow [2013-10-13 13:40:01 +0000 UTC]
It's a creative background story!
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Naga-Asura In reply to hangtenyouknow [2013-10-15 13:09:23 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! Glad you like it! I'm gonna have an actual story up for Hitomi when midterms are over so stay tuned for that!
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DivJustice [2013-10-10 09:48:38 +0000 UTC]
Completely agree. For a character whose one her alternative costume has her feet bare, she doesn't get too much of attention in this tickle context.
Nice story, by the way.
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Naga-Asura In reply to DivJustice [2013-10-10 19:42:41 +0000 UTC]
I know dude. Its just another one of those situations where the character is too obscure in comparison to the other forms of media and characters out there. People are quick to jump on the girls from Street Fighter or Mortal Kombat for this type of art but no one even looks at other fighting games and what girls they have to offer. Hitomi is a great character too with a nice personality and pretty good back story too; its a shame she's not more centralized in the story after her connections with Hayate.
Thanks for the comment dude. I'm glad you liked the story too. Be sure to keep an eye out for the story/stories that come before this picture here. I'm gonna tell how exactly Hitomi trained and what she did to get the circus in DOA 6 to let her and Lei-Feng train at it. Hopefully you like those as much as you enjoyed this one.
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DivJustice In reply to Naga-Asura [2013-10-10 20:48:52 +0000 UTC]
6? I didn't know a new DOA was announced XD
I can't consider myself a DOA connoisseur, since the first game from the saga I have owned and enjoyed is the fith one (I also have tried the fourth). But, after playing that game I understand your stance. It gave me the impression that the only characters who desserved any attention whatsoever, story-wise, were the ninjas.Β
There are a few ticke pics of DOA characters but they are usually focussed on, surprise, the ninjas. So if think you have it rough for liking Hitomi? My favourite character is Mila (How not to bring myself to like her? She is the first Spanish fictional character I have seen from a while that is not a walking stereotype!). And as far a I know there is nothing about her. Which I will fix sooner or later XD
I appreciate your lenghty reply and I will watch you to keep an eye on your future stories.
PS: If you accept minnor constructive criticism, on further stories try to check for little spelling errors and try to avoid repetitions. That aside your style is nice, keep it up!
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master417 [2013-10-10 02:43:41 +0000 UTC]
awesome color and amazing story XD i dont know anything about the game but now im interested in it X3
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Naga-Asura In reply to master417 [2013-10-10 19:49:10 +0000 UTC]
Thanks man, I'm glad you like my color work here. I'm also glad to know that you like the story of this picture too, I came up with it on the spot sort of since I had other story ideas for Hitomi that I wanted to make but didn't want this to be as good or better than the legitimate stories I want to make for her.
Thanks again so much for the picture dude, I really appreciate it. We gotta do more colaboration work like this where you draw it and I color it. If you keep making the lines clear enough to see and make the girls and their feet as well as you do then I'll we'll both have a new line up of genius in our galleries lol. Thanks again. Stay tuned for a note. I think I may have an idea for another pic or two that I'd like to see you make if possible.
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master417 In reply to Naga-Asura [2013-10-10 20:48:48 +0000 UTC]
well if the story you want to do with hitomiΒ is more awesome than this i really want to read it X3, and you are very welcome, i like to do pictures for my friends XD, im interested to hear your ideas X3 so i send you a note or you send me a note?
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