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This is th finalised version of the amor of flame... This is Iro- no... Ivan's Dragonstone amor of fire

I have designed this such that Ivan could move freely and openly in this suit.. where little of his mobility is hindered by overlapping chunky amor . The 2 tones of red are also a touch that i have finalised,.. as compared to a previous drawing and i must say so myself... this is a improvement, as it now better represents him in his adolescence stage, compared to the disproportional body prior.

The special skill here is flame burst. This skill ignites irons amor with red hot flames, while not burning him in the process. The heat can be adjusted to affect the output of the fire being expelled.

Armors have What we like to call a enhanced amor ( I'm sorry is i am conning this from access world, i just think it feels correct to say this) Irons armament is the Nova wing. The nova wing is stored on his waist and acts as a skirt amor, when used, it opens up to reveal a second pair of mechanical wings, allowing iron to manurer around the battle field more efficiently.

( special moves are still a work in progress... but the basic fighting style is a mix between close and long-range with fire enhanced weapons )

I would like to thank 2 people for the final design
The first of these people is , you gave me the more accurate design of the amor of flame and its what inspired me to reattempt the amor .. For that, i thank thee

The second person i would like to thank is , i am thanking you personally for your review of the original design some of which would be that
-"what I would probably fix is the lineart so it's not so thick and more defined. Ideally, you want those thicker lines around the edges of the character to make them stand out from whatever is behind him"

-"It confuses me where the wings come out of. I can tell that the purple wings are coming out of his shoulder blades, but the other two seem a little confusing. Also, you might want to unify the wings by giving them the same color(red/grey or purple white). It took me a while to understand that they were actually wings. Unless they are mechanical ones, in which case, you might want to give them a little more detail"

and the most necessary improvement
-"The hip area seems to have a problem, since... it kind of looks as if the legs are detached from the torso, or as if they attached by robotic/mechanical pistons and such?"

Thank you for the review... I was only able to improve so much thanks to these advices

Description
This is th finalised version of the amor of flame... This is Iro- no... Ivan's Dragonstone amor of fire

I have designed this such that Ivan could move freely and openly in this suit.. where little of his mobility is hindered by overlapping chunky amor . The 2 tones of red are also a touch that i have finalised,.. as compared to a previous drawing and i must say so myself... this is a improvement, as it now better represents him in his adolescence stage, compared to the disproportional body prior.

The special skill here is flame burst. This skill ignites irons amor with red hot flames, while not burning him in the process. The heat can be adjusted to affect the output of the fire being expelled.

Armors have What we like to call a enhanced amor ( I'm sorry is i am conning this from access world, i just think it feels correct to say this) Irons armament is the Nova wing. The nova wing is stored on his waist and acts as a skirt amor, when used, it opens up to reveal a second pair of mechanical wings, allowing iron to manurer around the battle field more efficiently.

( special moves are still a work in progress... but the basic fighting style is a mix between close and long-range with fire enhanced weapons )

I would like to thank 2 people for the final design
The first of these people is , you gave me the more accurate design of the amor of flame and its what inspired me to reattempt the amor .. For that, i thank thee

The second person i would like to thank is , i am thanking you personally for your review of the original design some of which would be that
-"what I would probably fix is the lineart so it's not so thick and more defined. Ideally, you want those thicker lines around the edges of the character to make them stand out from whatever is behind him"

-"It confuses me where the wings come out of. I can tell that the purple wings are coming out of his shoulder blades, but the other two seem a little confusing. Also, you might want to unify the wings by giving them the same color(red/grey or purple white). It took me a while to understand that they were actually wings. Unless they are mechanical ones, in which case, you might want to give them a little more detail"

and the most necessary improvement
-"The hip area seems to have a problem, since... it kind of looks as if the legs are detached from the torso, or as if they attached by robotic/mechanical pistons and such?"

Thank you for the review... I was only able to improve so much thanks to these advices