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N-Deed β€” Kabita

Published: 2010-11-07 18:26:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 4438; Favourites: 85; Downloads: 92
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Description It's been some time since I last posted, so here's a little something I managed to do this week.

It's also my first character painting, so I'd like to hear critiques, either bad or good, but especially the bad ones.

Ty for watching
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Comments: 25

COLOREDINLOVE [2012-04-29 00:10:33 +0000 UTC]

For your first I am in awe because I wouldn't have known that if you didn't say it!
Her overall look is well done..I wish I looked that good in my armor!

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WildRainOfIceAndFire [2010-12-05 15:43:21 +0000 UTC]

Felicitari!Deviatia ta este una dintre cele mai bune ale lunii Noiembrie pe
Gasesti topul de Arta Traditionala/Digitala aici: [link] si pe cel de Fotografie aici: [link] [trebuie votat la ambele categorii ca sa fie considerat votul]

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N-Deed In reply to WildRainOfIceAndFire [2010-12-06 11:41:04 +0000 UTC]

Andreea, aducatoarea vestilor bune ) Mersi frumos

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WildRainOfIceAndFire In reply to N-Deed [2010-12-07 11:55:04 +0000 UTC]

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Alligatorr [2010-12-04 23:10:45 +0000 UTC]

I know it is a little bit late to give you this message, but it is still important for you to know that: I’m very glad to announce you that your artwork has been chosen to be amongst the best deviations submitted to our in the month of October . You can check it out here: [link] & here: [link] . If you have seen this already, well done, if not, take a look. P.S. And, please, don’t forget to show us some love by ing the News Article.

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N-Deed In reply to Alligatorr [2010-12-06 11:32:36 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much

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momo2494 [2010-11-12 20:01:42 +0000 UTC]

e destul de greu sa faci numai in culoarea albastru , din punctul asta te'ai descurcat al naibii de bine
dar ai grija la anatomie ( mainile foarte mici si nu numai ) Ajuta'te de axe si fa multe schite , fi atent la echilibru, aici nu este neaparat cazul fiind o pozitie destul de usoara dar incearca sa intelegi cum este construit omul
incearca nu numai prin intensitatea culorii sa dai volum .la fata ar fi mers un contrast mult mai mare , ptr a se distinge mai bine fata
o alta problema este felul in care vezi lucrarile , nu te uita doar aproape de imagine la o dimensiune mare si uita'te so la o dimensiune mai mica , sau din spate
un lucru care imi place este legat de texturi , ai nimerit foarte bine , textura fundalului , a pielii si a armurii . in primul rand se vede o diferenta mare intre ele si in al doilea rand ai respectat proprietatiile acestora
se vede o evolutie mare si totusi ti'ai pastrat ceva al tau ( nu poate fi vb inca de un stil ) imagini in putine culori , contrastul clar -obscur nu este pronuntat dar el exista , depinde si de cum il folosesti , aici fundalul a fost putin mai deschis decat pielea , ceea ce e greu de urmarit ca imagine totala , vezi ce vrei sa iasa in evidenta si ce nu
sper ca nu te superi ca mi'am bagat botu in oala cu smantana si daca e ceva care nu ti'a placut data viitoare tac

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N-Deed In reply to momo2494 [2010-11-12 20:26:11 +0000 UTC]

Hey, eu am cerut sa mi se dea cu ciocanu peste deget, nu tu )
Anatomia stiu, inca mai am de lucru la ea. E greu sa fac fata si la facultate si la citit teoria pt pictat, pt modelare, animatie etc si efectiv de pus in practica. Dac-ar fi ziua de 48 de ore...ce bine-ar fi )

La partea cu privitu': de regula lucrez mai mult zoomed out si intorc imaginea in oglinda foarte des. E logic ca vei picta ceea ce ti se pare corect, altfel n-ai mai picta. Asta inseamna ca si daca gresesti s-ar putea sa ti se para tot corect. Aici e nevoie doar de timp si de experienta.

Asa ca...mersi mult de critica really. Prefer sa aud ce n-a iesit bine, decat un simplu "fain". Mersi inca o data

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momo2494 In reply to N-Deed [2010-11-13 16:24:41 +0000 UTC]

la pictat nu ma pricep "pt modelare " ce faci u la modelaj ? faci si sculptura ceva ? sau te refereai la altceva ?

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N-Deed In reply to momo2494 [2010-11-13 17:58:15 +0000 UTC]

modelare 3D o sa postez aici cand mai prind ceva experienta

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momo2494 In reply to N-Deed [2010-11-13 18:13:17 +0000 UTC]

am crezut ca faci cursuri de sculptura , ceramica , modelaj ceva
folosesti 3Dmax'ul ?
apreciez oamenii care fac atatea lucruri

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N-Deed In reply to momo2494 [2010-11-13 18:17:56 +0000 UTC]

maya si zbrush. 3ds-u' seamana foarte mult cu maya-ul. e mai user-friendly, dar si un pic mai sarac in optiuni

la modelare fizica nu m-as baga niciodata ) ii respect pe cei care fac, da' nu m-as vedea pe mine facand asta

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momo2494 In reply to N-Deed [2010-11-14 09:27:19 +0000 UTC]

de ce nu ? e bine omu sa faca cat mai multe si pe langa asta , e si foarte relaxant

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Skullok [2010-11-08 01:15:46 +0000 UTC]

if I were to add to this at all, I would say give her some hip bones. There is almost no definition to her stomach (fat/thin/athletic, what have you, you should see some shape here, whether it's bulging fat, or muscular undertones). Other than that I'd say you did a fantastic job. I love the color scheme, and the lighting (apart from that bit of shading I mentioned earlier). Her facial expression is also very cautious and concentrated, which goes quite well with the visual that you're watching someone walk through what could be some sort of dark cavern, armed with a shield and spear, great work!

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Skullok In reply to Skullok [2010-11-08 01:17:47 +0000 UTC]

oh, sorry, glaive* not spear lol

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N-Deed In reply to Skullok [2010-11-09 13:35:58 +0000 UTC]

Thank you Modified the thing. Looks a bit more like abs now haha

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Kiwi-the-One [2010-11-07 19:44:57 +0000 UTC]

Dood no goldie? Jk. But golden version is better

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N-Deed In reply to Kiwi-the-One [2010-11-07 19:55:39 +0000 UTC]

for the "not so evil" version move the hue +163 to the right XD

sorry, aveam deja 5 pe bej/portocaliu )

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yomansart [2010-11-07 19:30:04 +0000 UTC]

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N-Deed In reply to yomansart [2010-11-07 19:56:46 +0000 UTC]

ty

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Gladiot [2010-11-07 18:41:53 +0000 UTC]

I like the character design. You've done a good job separating the look of the armor, skin, and hair by the quality and type of reflection. Nice color pallet too. One thing I would adjust is the shadow on her waist from her left arm and shield... as in there is no shadow shown. Her right side is appropriately in shadow and her spear looks good leaving shadow and entering light but her left side, most noticably at her waist and lower torso, is entirely in light even with the big shield in the way. Neat shield design though.

Hope that was especially good for the bad and good for the good.

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N-Deed In reply to Gladiot [2010-11-07 19:22:25 +0000 UTC]

That was terribly good ) Thank you. I'm happy when someone pokes out whatever mistakes I make 'cause most people just leave a "nice" comment and...that's it.

I'll get to it tomorrow. My head feels like blowing up right now. Thank you again

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Gladiot In reply to N-Deed [2010-11-07 22:02:41 +0000 UTC]

Well, gee, don't blow up. As I said, nice design and presentation, just a little more "shield integration" needed.

Nice collie. I don't see collies, especially the larger types, very often. I guess the hair is high maintenance... unlike, say, a short haired lab.

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N-Deed In reply to Gladiot [2010-11-07 22:26:54 +0000 UTC]

Thank you Maintenance's not a headache, trust me. I don't know how short haired ones would be to care after, but even though he seems fluffy n' all..you just have to brush him once or twice a week. Most of the times I have to hop him into the tub to wash his paws...and that means every time he comes back from a walk XD Got used to it, eventually

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N-Deed In reply to N-Deed [2010-11-07 19:58:24 +0000 UTC]

couldn't resist XD played around with the shadows, feels better now. Good observation

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